Fan Fiction

Tempting like the Devil *Completed*

by Erii

Chapter 11

I'm so sorry, but I love you

*3rd Person Pov -
Key, Taemin, Taeyang, Seungri and Daesung*

«Key... Key.. Key, can I ask you something?» Seungri sat down next to Key and tried to get Key's attention.
«KEY!» Taemin hit the back of Key's head and he looked up with a confused face.
«Mother earth calling...» Taemin just said and pointed at Seungri.

«Thanks..» Seungri just said and Key looked at him.
«How come you haven't said a single thing since yesterday?»
«Yeah.. How come!?» Daesung joined in and both of them sat down in front of him trying to make him say something.
«Key, are you sad?» Seungri scooted closer to Key and put an arm around his shoulders. Key just shook his head.
«Feeling ill?» Dae joined in and touched Key's forehead. He shook his head again.

«I'm perfectly fine!» He just said and turned back to watch the skies fly by.

Seungri and Dae just exchanged looks before they left Key again.
«Something's weird!» They just said and nodded before sending Key a confused look.

Taemin sat down next to Key and he just smiled a secretly smile, like he was hiding something.
«Key.. I know your secret» He whispered and Key's head just flew up and he stared at Taemin.
«You do?!»
Taemin just started laughing and shook his head. At least now he knew that Key was hiding something.

«I saw you tried to call me yesterday..»
«Yeah..» Key pouted and looked at Taemin with an accusing look. «But you didn't pick up...»
«Aww..» Taemin hit Key's head playfully. «I was tired and.. uh.. busy.. Anyway, I have two ears here that you can use to whatever you want!»
Key just lightened up and before Taemin could regret, Key pulled on his collar and their head was almost touching as Key told Taemin everything, giggling at some parts, blushing at others. Taemin just smiled and tried to follow the story. For once it was a real story and not just a dream Key had had...

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*3rd Person Pov -
Jonghyun, TOP, Onew, G-D and Minho*

Jonghyun grabbed the bag tighter as he walked down the stairs to the basement. He didn't know why, but something felt weird and of course he knew what it was. Onew hadn't been waiting for him at the school gate. He wasn't holding around someone, and he knew that he would have to look at Onew somehow today. After Onew told him the truth yesterday. He had been crushed, but he couldn't show it. Key had been there with him, even though he had sent him back home right after Onew told him.

He pushed open the door and stepped into the dark room with concrete walls. The billiard table was where it used to stand. G-D and Minho was playing cards. Jonghyun just looked up and saw TOP come walking towards him. His face was so cold, Jonghyun didn't know what happened before he suddenly was crawling on the floor with a hurting jaw.

«Fucking bastard!» TOP just spit and looked down at Jonghyun like he was something so low he couldn't even look at him.
A soft giggle echoed from the couch and Jonghyun looked up only to see Onew sitting there like he owned the couch and he was grinning like a fool.

TOP bent down and grabbed Jonghyun's shirt.
«I told you to not mess with Onew, remember?!»

Jonghyun knew what he meant. He had promised to take care of Onew already the first time he confessed to Onew, but he hadn't been the one messing around. He was going to open his mouth, but TOP threw him over on the floor. Now he was getting angry. TOP had no right to treat him like this.

«Yah!» He jumped back up on his feet and glared at TOP. TOP just snickered and lifted his eyebrows.
«YAH! That’s enough!» G-D threw his cards over the table. «You cheat too?!» He pointed at Minho and got everyone’s attention. «How come everyone cheat?!» He kicked the table and Minho just stood up without another word.

«It's the entire point with the game, G-D!» TOP just said dryly.
«It's not fair!» He pouted and then suddenly he pointed at Onew. «Even he cheated, and that wasn't a game he cheated in...»

TOP looked annoyed again and he only sent G-D a warning look.
«You know what!?» G-D walked up to TOP. «I'm so sick and tired of you controlling everyone, everyone expect that bastard!» He pointed at Onew and suddenly G-D didn't look like the usual joke.
«Controlling...?» TOP just squinted his eyes and looked up at Minho who was suddenly smirking at the whole scene.

«G-D.. Let's just leave» Minho said and walked over to Jonghyun. He put his arm around Jonghyun and pulled him towards the door.
«See what you did?! But I don't care... You can believe that sucker.. We won't!» With that G-D followed after Minho and Jonghyun.

«Where are we supposed to go?» G-D asked and made a sad face as they were up the stairs. He just looked back at the door to the room. It had always been them together down there. Not always the best of friends, but they had not really had fights before.
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«It's so touching..» Onew laughed and stood up with a smirk.
«Standing up for me and everything!» He shook his head, and just jumped up and down on the couch. «Where are your friends now?» He let out a laugh again and just stood up.
«You’re just as pathetic as Jonghyun you know!» He just let out an annoyed sigh and fell back on the couch.

TOP just ignored him and just sat on the couch with his head in his hands. The thing he had feared the most had just happened. He had only been angry at Jonghyun because he knew that the friendship they all had would be ruined if Onew and he broke up, and it had.

«You know... I never really liked you!» TOP's head flew up and he just stared at Onew.
«You were just strong, and I knew that as long as I had you on my side no one would tell Jonghyun the truth...»

TOP let his head drop down again. He had no idea why he started liking this guy in the first place. He had known about Onew and his cousin. He was the one who had taken care of Onew after what happened, and Onew had used him as his shoulder to cry on, and somehow on the way TOP fell for him. He had warned Jonghyun to begin with, but at that time Jonghyun was so in love with Onew, it was no way his words had gotten trough.

«No one likes you obviously... Then I don't have to think badly about it!» Onew just smirked and nodded his head.

TOP laughed. He had gotten over Onew with some time, and now... He had someone entirely different on his mind. He didn't care what Onew said, he really didn't. He had promised to be at Onew's side whatever happened. He had been, and Onew was pushing him away right now.

«Maybe... But I'm still better than you!» TOP just smirked before he walked past Onew, letting his hand fall on his shoulder as a last touch and as a good bye. He knew Onew was going to regret doing it like this, but he didn't care to tell him. He wouldn't listen anyway.

He stopped in the door and took a deep breath.
«You don't always have to protect yourself with coldness...» With that he walked out of there. He had to find the rest. No way he would let these years with friendship just pass by like that!

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~Key Pov~

Taemin was holding around me the entire way to the gym. He had been smirking ever after I told him about what happened with Jonghyun.
«You think he would be jealous if he saw us now?» Taemin just asked and smiled innocently.
«If that’s why you’re hugging me, get the fuck away from me!» I tried to push him off, but he just laughed.
«Nono.. I just enjoy your aura. It's so filled with love...» Taemin chuckled and put his head on my shoulder.

Taeyang just rolled his eyes as we walked into the gym.

We stopped and I just blushed as we looked up on the stage. Jonghyun and G-D was trying out all the outfits and Minho was either showing thumbs up or rolling on the floor laughing.
Was this really how stupid we used to look?

Jonghyun spun around and looked our way. He just bowed down to us and lifted the black hat he just wore before throwing it at G-D.

«SEUNG-RI!»
Seungri jumped next to me and almost hid down behind me and Taemin.
G-D was waving like mad and I had to laugh. Seungri just blushed and turned away.
«If he don't stop I'll go away again!»

«G-DRAGON!» Daesung suddenly started jumping up and down waving back at G-D. We all just stopped and looked at him. He just smiled and shook his shoulders.
«I just thought I would join in for Seungri...» He just laughed and ran over to the stage.

I walked over to the stage together with Taeyang, not really looking at Jonghyun.

«Key, don't we have physics class together?» Jonghyun suddenly asked and rolled over on his stomach. I just looked up and nodded. The only class we had together actually, and I never paid attention, only stared at him usually. It was actually the only reason why I got extra class in physics.. Just to be able to have the same class as him.

«I knew I had seen you somewhere...» He just nodded and rolled back on his back.
«Lets go together then!» He turned to me with a smile and I just smiled back. So we were going to ditch all other classes for the school play, but not physics?

Jonghyun jumped off the stage and walked over to me.
«We'll be back!» He just turned to the others and lifted his eyebrows in a flirting matter and pointed at me. I just giggled and blushed. Jonghyun was acting all cute today. Maybe yesterday hadn't been a dream after all!
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I just walked over to my usual seat behind Jonghyun. Just when class was about to start he turned to me and pointed at the free seat next to him. I just looked around like he was talking to someone else. It was still strange having him actually talking and being friendly with me, and he was still so nice even after what happened yesterday.

I just hurried over to the chair next to him and he just grinned.
«I'm going to talk about gravity..» He suddenly whispered and held up a memory stick.

The teacher called him up and he started talking like the top student he was. I just couldn't take my eyes off him, he was so perfect. He would look my way once in a while, smile and go back to what he was talking about. He would even wink at me once in a while and I just wanted to disappear every time it happened.

People started giggling as they realized that I was almost crawling under the desk, blushing. Obviously everyone knew about me liking Jonghyun.

«Jonghyun~» I whined and pouted as he sat down next to me.
«I was good right?»
I just crossed my arms.
«You’re failing so miserably...» He suddenly whispered and I turned to him with a surprised look. Yeah, I was failing in physics but what did that have to do with this?
«Psh,.. Tempting..»

I just blushed again. Why had I even started the tempting thing? Even I knew I wouldn't be tempting whatever I did.

«Whatever...» I just whispered. Suddenly he grabbed my hand under the desk and just winked at me.
«At least try...» He just whispered and I looked away. I would try for sure. If that was what he wanted!
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~Taemin Pov~

I looked down and just sucked in all the air I could. Why was it so hard? Why couldn't I just be like Key? He would be happy just if Jonghyun looked his way. Why was it that I wanted so much more all the time?

«Taemin?»
I looked up and just smiled. «Would this outfit be good enough?»
Minhp held up the outfit he was going to wear for the Juliette dance.
«Why do you ask? Don't you have eyes?» I just answered and turned my head away.

«I just wanted to know if you like it?» I quickly looked back at him and the outfit. He would look damn hot in it, and I was sure he knew himself.
«What do you want me to say then?» I just fired back. «That you will look effing hot and everyone will fall off their chairs watching you?»

Minho just nodded. «Something like that!» He just said and sat down next to me.
«You angry or something?»
«No..» I answered all too quick, but it was true. I wasn't really angry, I was just confused and... and... I had no idea how to describe it. It was like I finally wanted something...
«How come you didn't answer my messages yesterday?» He just asked folding the clothes.
«Why should I?» I just answered and looked at him.

Minho just picked up the neatly folded clothes and looked at me. Somehow I couldn't read his facial expression. It was like he was thinking of something to do to me and at the same time he looked hurt.

«I thought we were getting along...» He suddenly said before he just walked out of the room and I hit the nearest thing I could hit.

Why did I have to be so damn overprotective of my feelings? But that was the problem, Minho only wanted us to be friends, he told me himself.
«Minho?!» I just ran out of the room. I just couldn't take this anymore. There was no way I would end up like Key, loving someone just dreaming of that person loving you back, and then maybe in the end there was a small chance. No... I would tell Minho right now! At least I would get to know that it was no use and this feeling would go over. It was most likely just a fling... Just like Taeyang!

«Minho!» I chased him out from the room with the set pieces and saw him stopping in the end of the small hall behind the stage.
«Yeah?» He just said and looked at me.
«What would you say if I told you that you would really look great in those clothes?»
«Uhm.. That I already knew that...»
«Then what would you say if I told you that your dancing and rapping is quite good?»
«I already knew that...»
«So, what if I told you..» I stopped and he looked quite confused now. «..that I really like you..?»
«I already kne—WHAT?!»

«What would you say?»
«I.. I'd say I like you too, but not...»
«Not the way I like you, I get it, I get it!» I turned to leave. What had I been thinking anyway?!
«Sorry...» Minho whispered behind me and I just shrugged my shoulders. It was like it was.

«I’M SO SORRY, BUT I LOVE YOU~ IT'S ALL A LIE...» I jumped up in the air and spun around my heart almost jumping out of my chest.
«DAESUNG!» I just yelled and ran after the poor boy that was sprinting down the hall yelling like mad. Of course he couldn't just shut up about what he saw.

A pair of arms suddenly caught me and I was pulled back.
«Don't hit him too hard!» Minho just smiled before he looked down, now he really looked sad.
«But we could be friends right?!»

I snorted and just shrugged my shoulders. We were already friends anyway...
«I mean.. You never let me finish..» I furrowed my brows and tilted my head.
«Where was I?» He pulled in a lot of breath before he looked back down again.
«Ah... I said I like you too, but not as a boyfriend.» I already knew, why was he torturing me now? «But that's because I don't trust a relationship, just like Jonghyun and Onew. It might end just like that..» My eyes were soon going to pop out. Was he playing with me?
«So, I really like you too...»

«I don't understand...» I just answered and looked down.

Before I could react he had pulled my face in and his lips were so gently placed over mine. My eyes just closed and I felt myself being pulled closer to him.
«What I said is... I really want to be with you, and if you let me, I'll be there for you, but nothing more than a friend you can hug and kiss and...» He stopped and wiggled his eyebrows.

«Pervert!» I just answered, but my heart was almost jumping up and down. If this was how Key felt it, maybe I could understand his weird behaviour a little more now.

Minho just smiled as he wrapped his arms around me as we walked back to where the rest were.

«AWW... Shouldn't you be thanking me?!» Daesung just popped up in front of me and I tried to hit him, but he just dodged the hit and smiled.

Key and Jonghyun came back and Jonghyun just had a secret smile while Key was pouting. He looked at me and Minho before he just went back to pouting and ran over to Taeyang like he could save him from Jonghyun.
The door opened again and TOP stepped in.

«Yah! Get lost!» G-D suddenly yelled. He had been pretty much silent the most of the time, practicing the tiny part he had as the housekeeper.
«What do you want now?» Minho joined in and G-D had to hold back Jonghyun. Now this was weird.

«Can... can I join you guys?» TOP asked and looked down.
«YEAH! Come join the force!» Daesung answered and jumped up and down.
«Shut up!» Seungri just said and smacked the back of his head.

«Why would we let you be here with us? Didn't you choose Onew?!» Jonghyun asked rudely.
«I'm sorry...» TOP just turned around to walk away, but out of all people Key stepped forward.
«Yah! Why are you all so mean?!»

TOP stopped and turned around.
«Yeah.. I think we should let TOP be here too, we don't own the gym!» Daesung joined in.
«TOP was the one that saved me back then...» Key said and nodded his head.
«TOP is always nice, even though he doesn't smile a lot!» Daesung joined and smiled while bobbing his head from side to side.

Suddenly Taeyang stepped forwards and walked straight over at TOP. The next thing happening was something none of us had expected. It hit us all straight in the face...

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Heeey! I'm back~ ! (Finally with a new update!)
I know I'm really late, but of course I had to have the exam and I got physics out of everything I could have gotten.(The only thing I knew nothing about) Anyway... Of course I did good, but...Ah, now I'm finished with all of my exams! Feels so good! Just 2 weeks left with ''school'' and its summer! =D
I'll be updating just like before now! =)

It's 2MIN now.. Or kind of.. ^^
So, this fic won't end in a long time yet.. So more confusing things to come! ^^ =D
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Comments replies: (They might be short x( )

TheBlobMaster ^^ → Haha, JongKey isn’t going wild yet ^^ They are still in the “getting to know each other better” period, but Key have to practice his temptations! ^^ xP Romantic chapter.. Tihi.. If you say so… ^^ Better chapters in the future? We’ll see ^^ =) ♥
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Secret FanGirl → Actually.. About the pairings in Big Bang… I was thinking of making them all really messed up, but since I already have a G-RI here, I’m not sure. I just hope you can live with any couple I make ^^ Haha… And for TaecOnew, there might be some problem, especially now that Onew has pushed away all of his friends =( Haha, how did you know I would write 2MIN in this chapter? Guess I’m an easy person to understand xP LoL..
By the way, thanks for pointing out my error! (Haha, almost had an embarrassing laughing fit when I realized my error.. Suddenly Onew was Key’s love too, lol!)
Aww, thank you! My exam went well so again I guess I have to thank everyone who wished me good luck! =D
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EunKey404 → I’m sorry for not adding a lot of G-RI in this chapter, but there will be more of them! Can’t leave them out! ^^ Haha, I was singing the “strong baby” while writing that part so eh… Yeah… Guess that’s why G-D said it xP
Haha.. JongKey moment ended too quick? At least there will be more of them ^^
Ah.. Onew’s cousin is from 2PM ^^ (Didn’t know anything about them before just a few weeks ago either so.. xP )
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Cindy → Wah, such a long comment! =D Happy-happy-happy! =)
Haha.. And I was worrying for adding Taecyeon, but seems like I did the right thing then! =D Hihi, yes, Key was trying to make Jonghyun laugh, and then they kissed! =D (even though they acted like it didn’t really happen the day afterwards x| ) Seriously? You haven’t read about people running into parking cars before? Haha, I do it all the time xP The truth about Taeyang and TOP will be revealed in the next chapter though ^^ ;)
Thanks for wishing me good luck! Loove ♥
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hofasho22 → In one chapter I almost made all the couples, haha, glad you liked it! =D Junsu will come back to the story later, for now I’m concentrating on JongKey! <3 (And 2MIN)
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Ida~ → Its me that should be feeling bad for not being able to update any faster =( Haha.. If you get that excited from one kiss, I guess you’ll be excited a lot in the future of this fic ^^ haha xP Jonghyun and Onew… More about them to come ^^ And yep, Seungri is cute hitting his head xP
Aww… Thank you! Loove ♥
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AhMin → Haha, I remind you of your math exam through my fic… Not sure that is good or not, haha.. (JK)
I’m sure you’ve found out about the idol army show by now, but if you haven’t.. I have only watched the episodes with SHINee and 2PM though. You can see it on YouTube and it’s ep. 14 and 15 ^^ (Loved those episodes! =D ) Haha.. I also want Onew and Jonghyun to go back being friends, and not date… But… Hmm.. I don’t know.. Might happen ^^
You’re so smart so I might start using your ideas, but everything you stated was somehow something I had been thinking off =)
Didn’t get out of the test though, but thanks or wishing me good luck! ^^ Of course I have an idea with Junsu! =D Not entirely sure I’ll use it,… But.. Most likely I will xP Haha, yup, I get hit by parked cars all the time, it’s funny (lol) so instead of doing like almost every other fic where they get into a car accident, I just made him run into a parked car instead xP Haha, but I guess it’ll take a little while more before they’ll be entirely happy. Seungri is still kind of.. shy(?)
Psh… I’m obviously getting better with my romantic stuff since the kiss obviously was romantic, haha^^ And I gave you and idea for a song?! (Hahaha… happy!)
Glad you think my fic is good!=D ♥
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Ayu → It’s possible to run into a parking car xP (I’ve done it a lot of times… But I guess I’m just stupid, haha!) Haha, G-RI rape.. I’m afraid it’ll end like that if Seungri doesn’t realize his feelings for G-D soon! xP Poor Onew and Taecyeon.. Guess I have to make Onew a good guy soon then xP Thanks for wishing me good luck! It helped =D
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aZn_sw3in → Taecyeon and Onew is bad or good? Haha xP Haha, gay… Taecyeon… tsh.. haha! I guess it’s just yaoi xP And JongKey is almost there, but this fic won’t end yet.. It’s more to come ^^ ♥
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Nana → Yeah! My favourite couple was also Nickhun and Minho, but since I have 2MIN I couldn’t have them like that in here xP Haha, I can live with having the same ideas as you! Means you’re a really amazing person! (Joking.. sounds like I’m saying I’m an amazing person! xP) Even though I guess you’re really amazing, since you are reading my story! Haha xP Thanks for wishing me good luck =) More JongKey kisses will come ^^
You broke your hand!? Auch… I’ve never broken anything at all =Z *talking to your hand* Get well soon, neh! =)
Looove yah! ♥
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iluvhenrybb → Ah, I was wondering where you went, happy to see you here! =D Haha, as you know I like to mess up the personalities, so guess that’s why Onew and Key seems to be switching personalities xP (Even though I think Key is cute in real life too) Sweetheart.. haha! I don’t know why, but I’ve suddenly started loving Taeyang so gave him a bigger role in this fic than I have in my other fics xP Thanks for reading!
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sokachangmin → Haha, again I started singing “sorry, sorry~” xP Haha, you’re a faithful reader because you always comment when you can! ^^ That’s the point I guess xP Haha, I’m just glad you liked the chapters! And the Jongkey too! =) Guess I have to make more JongKey scenes like that ^^ =D Tihi… seemed like a lot was cute! =) (I’m happy!) Haha, I’m just glad you wrote a looot, even though I had to read it two times to get everything! =D Even though your comments might be late, at least they are hell-a-funny to read! ;)
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dorkyy_azn0221 → Hehe, yeah, the comeback performance was so good! I loved it too! =) Glad I could satisfy you though! Thanks for wishing me good luck! Worked ^^
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Kim HeeChul → Hey~ , Haha, I know.. I’m so surprised that I can get long comments like that xP (I’m just glad!) Glad you think Seungri is funny =)
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cookiesxcream → Hahaha.. Stupid Junsu for stealing his first peck, haha! xP But since he got that kiss with Jonghyun he totally forgot Junsu xP
I’ll for sure add more JongKey from now… Will be focusing on them for a while I think ^^ Have to get them together for real now! =D
Thanks for liking the fic! =D Makes me really happy!
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