| Fan Fiction |
by Erii
«Wanna continue?»
With a blush Key nodded his head, his deep, now black eyes was dragging Jonghyun in, making him go crazy. Jonghyun claimed Key's lips once again, sucking on them, biting, exploring every corner.
His hands slipping under Key's shirt, rubbing the soft skin there, feeling up his chest. His mouth never leaving Key's.
Soft moans escaping Key's lips every time he was able to pull some air.
Jonghyun suddenly broke the kiss and sat up on Key's stomach. Key let out a gasp in surprise, Jonghyun sitting on top of him, making it difficulty to breath. Jonghyun suddenly smirked and grabbed both of Key's arms and pinned them up over his head. Key just gasped again and looked up at Jonghyun with those innocent eyes.
Jonghyun chuckled and bent down to kiss Key's cheek. One kiss, two kisses, three kisses. Key turned his head to meet his lips, but he pulled away laughing.
«Patience Key..» He just said and wiggled his eyebrows. Key started struggling under him, lifting his body and trying to get Jonghyun down to his lips again.
«What is it that you want Key?» Jonghyun asked and just licked his lips while winking down at Key.
«Y—you...» Key stuttered and Jonghyun just chuckled before he bent down to Key's ear, washing hot air over it making Key shudder under him.
«You sure you're ready for it?»
Jonghyun had never done it before, Onew never wanted to go that far with him. He was so nervous of doing it wrong. What if he would hurt Key? He really didn't want to do something they would regret.
«Jonghyun~! Just give it to me!» Key just answered and pouted, looking like he would start cry if he didn't get his will soon. Jonghyun just chuckled. Key was tempting just the way he was... He didn't need to try that hard.
«As you wish!» Jonghyun attacked his lips, still pinning Key down. Key suddenly managed to get his hands free and with one hand he pulled Jonghyun closer and with the other he started pulling on Jonghyun's shirt.
Jonghyun broke the kiss panting and just pulled of the shirt not bothering to look where he threw it. Key just smiled and started touching the warm skin, letting his fingers trace it all. Running his hands slightly over his nipples, making Jonghyun arch down on him.
Jonghyun’s hands were already under Key's shirt and he just pulled it off and Key just blushed. Jonghyun couldn't take his eyes off Key. He was such a perfect boy.
Key's hands suddenly started fiddling with Jonghyun's belt and Jonghyun just froze, looking down at Key who was just smiling cutely like he wasn't doing anything wrong at all.
«And I thought you were so innocent!» Jonghyun just said and laughed as Key's face took a deep shade of red.
He pushed away his hands and opened the belt, pulling down his pants. Key just looked at him, and he felt pretty naked even though he was still wearing his boxers. Jonghyun just shook his head before he grabbed Key's pants and pulled on them. No fair he was the only one almost naked.
Key just gasped and tried his best to at least keep his boxers up when Jonghyun pulled his pants off of him. Suddenly Jonghyun pulled Key up and up on his lap. Key's head was now touching the ceiling. Jonghyun lifted him up and sat him back down so that their erections were touching through the boxers.
Jonghyun pulled down Key's head and they started making out again. Key started rubbing himself up and down in Jonghyuns lap, driving Jonghyun crazy. He pushed Key back down and put his head between Key's legs biting his inner tights.
«Uuhhh...» Key's head flew up and Jonghyun just kissed the spot he bit and moved his hand up messaging Key's member and before Key could protest he pulled down the boxers making Key's member pop out.
He just smiled as Key gasped out, hiding his face.
«Key.. We can stop...» Jonghyun's voice was soft, but there was no way Key wanted them to stop. He wanted Jonghyun, he wanted everything Jonghyun could give him. Key shook his head like mad and just looked as Jonghyun bent down and kissed the tip of Key's member.
«Pff...» Key let out the air he was holding and just put his head back as Jonghyun licked his way from the tip down to his balls. Sucking on them, making Key close his eyes and bite on his lips to don't scream.
Jonghyun went back up, and with his eyes on Key, he engulfed the entire member, making Key's eyes fly open, staring down at him. A shimmer of pleasure was making Key see the stars.
Jonghyun let the member go and pulled down his boxer. Key's delicate hand suddenly touched his member. Jonghyun just bit his lip and looked down at Key, he was just too cute. Key slowly started rubbing it and Jonghyun put his head backwards and when he opened his eyes, he could see the picture hanging right over him.
He suddenly pushed Key's hand away and lied down on Key again, kissing him, making them both panting again. Jonghyun slowly put his fingers in Key's mouth and he just sucked on them, his big eyes never leaving Jonghyun. He moved the fingers down to Key's ass, and Key just spread his one leg to the side, totally seductive! Jonghyun found the hole and slowly he started pushing in the first finger. Key just made a face, but didn't say anything. He started moving the finger, feeling the muscles slowly tense up and he added another finger.
«Aahh... ouch..» Key just whimpered and Jonghyun bit down on his lip, worrying too much. Key was already hurting and he had only added two fingers.
«Want me to stop?» Jonghyun wasn't sure if he could do this.
Key just shook his head, but his eyes were filled with tears. It hurt too much, he couldn't even speak.
Jonghyun just looked at Key's pained face before he made the decision. It wouldn't hurt for the one on top.
«Fine, but do as I say, okay?!» Jonghyun suddenly flipped them around so that he was on the bottom and Key was just looking down at him with big eyes.
«Here, I'll suck on your fingers..» He just grabbed Key's hand and sucked on his fingers, making them wet with salvia.
Key was terrified, but at the same time it was somehow exciting to have Jonghyun lying under him. He slowly inserted one finger in Jonghyun and Jonghyun just nodded to make him continue. It wasn't that bad yet. Two more fingers and he was still fine with it. Key pulled his fingers out and placed himself in front of Jonghyuns hole. Jonghyun couldn't wait anymore and grabbed Key's ass pulling him forward so that his member trusted into him with just one thrust.
The pain washed through his body was too much. It was like he was ripped open and he let out a scream. Key just froze and looked down at him, but Jonghyun was fine with it. As long as he was the one hurting and not Key. He started moving and Key slowly started thrusting in and out of him.
Key was almost cumming right there, the hotness that was around his member, but he kept it back, making the orgasm build up inside him. Their bodies clasping together with every thrust.
«Mmmmh... Uhhh..»
The pleasure was now taking over Jonghyun and he was inside his own world, moaning. Key trusted into Jonghyun with a final hard thrust and there both of them came together. Key falling down on Jonghyun, not caring about the mess they had made.
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After a while Jonghyun pushed Key of him and just kissed Key's forehead.
~Key pov~
Jonghyun put the blanket around me before he disappeared down the stairs. I just lied there covering my face. What did we just do? How would I be able to look into his eyes now? But then a huge grin spread over my face. It had been amazing, and not only that, but the loving gaze Jonghyun gave me, how much he cared. I just turned around hugging the blanket. It was just too amazing to be true. I just couldn't stop smiling. I looked over at where my pants had been thrown. Should I call Taemin? Maybe not... He would just beat Jonghyun to death, making him responsible.
I had never felt so happy before, and it was not because of the orgasm I just had... It was true love!
~Jonghyun Pov~
I limped over to the bathroom, the pain washing up my spine just too much. I let myself drop down on the floor there. I should have let Key prepare me better. If I just didn't push him in like that maybe it wouldn’t have hurt so fucking much. I suddenly felt something hot run down my tights and when I saw the blood, I just turned around gasping. One thing I couldn't take, and it was blood. I crept over to the toilet and emptied my stomach.
I stood up, trying not to look down and slowly I turned on the shower and let the water wash away everything. The blood, and a little of the pain. And then the laughter took over me. I actually did it with Key. And even though the pain now was unbearable it had been so worth it! Nothing had been better than this, seriously. But one thing was for sure. I was never going to let Key feel the pain I was feeling right now! If he really wanted to be bottom once, I would have to make him all drunk so that he wouldn't be able to feel anything.
I turned off the water and just got a pair of grey jeans and a white shirt before running down to the kitchen. I was going to continue on what I really planned for us. I put out a set of new clothes and a towel in the bathroom before I limped up to the attic and smiled when I saw Key sleeping hugging the blanket tight.
«Key?!» He opened his eyes slowly and looked at me confused before he smiled the most adorable smile I had ever seen.
«Go get a shower!» I just said and kissed his forehead. He just nodded and started climbing down with the blanket still wrapped around him.
I smiled and just waited outside the bathroom for him. Was this really love?
He came out, his hair wet and he was blushing and just moving his head from side to side, jokingly. I grabbed his hand and led him down the stairs to the kitchen where I had decorated everything with candles. He just smiled and suddenly he threw his arms around me and hugged me from behind.
Yep.. This was definitely love!
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*3rd Person Pov -
Taecyeon and Onew*
«Onew, how come TOP won't pick up my calls?»
«Don't care!» Onew just answered not even looking away from the movie he was watching.
«Onew.. I'm serious..!»
«I guess he hates me, why would he pick up when you use my mobile phone to call him?»
«He hates you....?!» Taecyeon suddenly started to get a bad feeling about this. TOP had been Onew's best friend for like forever. If he suddenly hated Onew now. There would be a good reason for it.
«Don't tell me you pushed them all away?»
«Why do you care?!» Onew suddenly threw the remote across the room towards where Taecyeon was standing and stood up just sending Taecyeon a death glare.
«Oh.. So that's the tone you want to use?!» Taecyeon just answered.
«Don't act like my dad.. Or worse.. Your dad!»
Taeyeon just fisted his hands and stepped closer to Onew. Here he was back trying everything to make Onew happy again, and he was still acting so damn cold towards him. And now he was suddenly pulling in his dad, comparing him to him. The worst person he knew about.
Onew's head flew to the side as Taecyeon slapped him across the face.
«You never speak to me like that! You hear me!?» He was pinning Onew up the wall, holding Onew's head between his hands with so much force that Onew was whimpering.
He let Onew go and shook his head in disgust.
«You're so immature!»
He started walking towards the door and stopped outside the door to get himself together. Why was he slowly starting to feel a slightly feeling of hate towards Onew? He just wanted to cry, but what could he do? Onew was using everything he could to hurt him. He would never show Taecyeon the love he had for him, and Taecyeon knew Onew loved him. He just knew it. He just hit the wall, but that was when he heard the cries. He turned around and pushed the door open and looked in. Onew was leaning on the wall, his face leaning on his knees, and he was crying his eyes out.
Taecyeon just turned away, pain written all over his face. How could he hurt Onew like that? He had never seen Onew cry before. Not for real. He would fake a tear or two when he needed to do it, but never cry out like that. It was like it was his soul breaking inside the room.
«Onew! I'm sorry!» Taecyeon sat down next to Onew pulling the boy into his embrace.
«I love you baby» Taecyeon just dodged the weak punch Onew was trying to do, but he just pulled Onew's face closer and kissed his forehead. «Stop crying now.. I'll never hurt you again!»
«I'm so mean...» The words were just a whisper, but they pierced Taecyeons heart.
«No... You're just being stubborn!»
«I'm making everyone hate me! Admit it... You're starting to hate me too!» His eyes were filled with tears and Taecyeon wanted to hit himself for even thinking bad about Onew just now.
«I would never hate you.. I love you, remember?»
«Just wait.. You'll start hate me, then leave me..»
«Never! Not if you want me to stay!»
Onew let out a sigh in pain and just clinged onto Taecyeon. He couldn't trust anyone. So why had he to be so weak right now? His plan was almost finished. He would get rid of everyone. He would be better off alone. Like that it would hurt like hell, but it would be better like that! At least he wouldn't have to feel the pain of being left by someone he loved again.
But Taecyeon didn't leave him no matter what he did... Maybe he was really staying this time.
'trust him'… He just smiled and sniffed, feeling so well in his embrace. 'Trust him'… He nodded his head. He was going to trust Taecyeon this time!
«I'm sorry!» He just whispered and Taeyeon smiled.
«I know Onew! Just don't do it anymore...»
Taecyeon carried Onew to the couch, but there he took Onew's phone and walked out of the room. Even if TOP didn't want to pick up at least some of his other friends might. He wasn't going to give up. Onew needed his friends right now!
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*3rd Person Pov -
Daesung and ....*
«You feel better now?»
«Mmm..» Daesung just answered, not opening his eyes, just hugging the other one tight. He loved the warmth of the other ones body.
«Wha.. Better get you home now.. It's getting late!»
«Stay a little more...» Daesung just whispered and the other one chuckled. Daesung was so cute. He had asked for that an hour ago too.
«Daesung... Don't you feel that this is somehow weird?»
«No...» Daesung just answered and put his head to the side so that his lips were touching the neck of the other.
Daesung was sitting on his lap with his arms around him on a bench by the river.
«Do you hate Taeyang now?»
«No.. He is the best!» Daesung looked up, nodding his head and smiling. «He deserves the best!»
«What about Seungri then?»
«We share everything! He let me have everything I want that he has anyway!»
«You think he'll share me with you?»
Daesung looked up and his eyes met with G-D's. G-D had caught him in the hall. He had hugged him, given him comfort, and listened to his story. He had taken him out here where they had been sitting while the sun went down, and now he had put his jacket around Dae, still hugging him.
«Mhm.. Seungri is nice like that!»
G-D just smiled and stroke Daesung's hair. Seungri was like the love of his life because of his amazing attitude, but Daesung.. He just wanted to put him in his pocket and keep him. So amazingly cute and he had everything Seungri didn't have to make him perfect.
«Do you want to share me then?»
Daesung blushed and looked up at G-D. He was nice, he was good looking, and he could always make Daesung smile. He was caring and he even looked like Ji-Yong in Big bang.
He just nodded and smiled his smile that made G-D laugh and he pinched Dae's nose.
«Come here..» He pulled Daesung's head closer and put his lips over Dae's.
Daesung just enjoyed his first kiss. His arms locking themselves around G-D's neck and he was melting into his arms.
G-D broke the kiss and stroke Daesung's cheek.
«I'll follow you back home now..» Daesung just nodded and he was happy as G-D held his hand dragging him along.
«Uhm.. Don't you think we should be quiet about this?» G-D suddenly asked and Daesung nodded his head. He had been thinking the same thing. Better not letting Seungri know that he was sharing his love with him.
«Our secret!» Daesung just exhaled and jumped cutely up in the air before he hugged G-D again.
«Yep.. Jump on my back and I'll carry you!» Daesung just jumped onto his back, kissing G-D's ear and neck, holding onto him while being carried home. G-D was somehow becoming the one for him!
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*2MIN*
Minho smiled as he watched Taemin dance. It was something so breathtaking and he couldn't take his eyes of the beautiful boy. Taemin stopped and turned to him making a heart sign with his hands before hitting his forehead sticking his tongue out.
«Cute...» Minho just commented and waved for Taemin to come over to him. Taemin walked over to him, moving his hips and just wiggling his eyebrows.
«Silly!» Minho said and stood up grabbing Taemin, giving him small kisses over the neck.
«YAH!» Taemin looked towards the door and saw TOP and Taeyang stand in the door. Minho just looked over at TOP with raised eyebrows. Even though no one had been complaining after TOP came back, they still weren't the best of friends.
«Have you seen G-D somewhere?» He just asked.
«No...» Minho just answered and let go of Taemin's hand that he had been holding while they were kissing.
«Hm.. By the way.. You're coming with me tomorrow. We're going to talk with Taecyeon and Onew!»
«What?! No...»
«Taecyeon called me a hundred times, and when I finally picked up he sounded kind of worried...»
«I don't care! You can go see your old love, but I don't have anything to do with that sucker anymore!»
Taeyang seemed to flinch by the ''old love'' part, but he just stood there. Calm like always.
«I won't see him without you guys!» TOP just said and put his arms around Taeyang. He meant all of them.
«Jonghyun agreed as long as he could bring Key... You can bring Taemin if you want.. We're just going to see them after the school play tomorrow! No big deal... Why don't just meet up with them. All you'll get is an apology anyway!»
Minho looked over at Taemin and shrugged his shoulders. He had been planning something for him and Taemin tomorrow after the school play, but he guessed it could wait a little. His Taemin... He smiled.. Taemin loved him, and he...? Yup.. Even though he wouldn't let Taemin own him, he loved Taemin too!
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Wooooaaaah… That rated part..*Blushes*
I have no idea how many times I blushed and hid my face while writing that part. It’s been a while since I wrote Rated like that, and I think it’s my longest rated and the most “rated” rated I’ve ever written xP
Anyway…. G-D …?! Two timing?
Onew and Taecyeon, and Taecyeon being the good guy^^
My READERS! <3 SARANGHAE!
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Comment replies:
TheBlobMaster ^^ → Haha ^^ So, was the rest of the rated good enough? ^^ (So that I’m forgiven for stopping back then xP )
Daesung.. Poor boy, but at the same time.. I think he is a little too stupid right now =Z
So Onew… I’m still not sure if he is nice or not, but I know what’ll happen in the next chapter (I should know) and seriously… I don’t look forward to write it, but hope you’ll look forward to read it! =D Oh…. Big Bang giving out new album too?? Oh…. I just love them! They are so effective!! =D Taeyang and Minho are kind of alike? Hm.. I wonder how it would have been if Minho gave out a solo album xP
Anyway.. Looove ^^ ♥
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dorkyy_azn0221 → Hahaha? Key is a slut? Psh.. Tihi xP JongKey smut =D (Even though it was a little too much for me this time, but guess it’s like that since I’m the writer xP ) And lovey dovey is fun to write so guess they’ll be that as long as they can! =D ^^
Loove ♥
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sokachangmin → Hahaha! Seriously! Its really funny using song titles xP And you were really good at it too! The [ “o” man ] was just something I wouldn’t have thought of! Genius! xP (But I won’t do it this time since I’m crazy enough as it is right now, haha) Daesung obviously found a way to forget TOP.. (Not sure it is a good thing though -_-) And glad I made you like the JongKey couple! =D (Since I didn’t have a lot of 2MIN here…) Summer school? Hmm.. I’m too lazy for that! Haha, anyway.. Let’s hope your parents are in the summer mood letting you on then! ^^ =D
Loove ♥
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yama-yama-yamapi → Haha! I was actually thinking of not write the rated part after all and just stop it, but decided not to… HAPPY?!^^ xD Decided I didn’t want you to go crazy ^^ Haha, you really want Junsu to rape Key that bad? =O Psh.. Maybe next time xP Wah.. Glad you understand Taeyang =D Was afraid that no one would like the idea of them together at all =Z Oh.. Am I in trouble for the GD-Daesung now? xP
I actually knew that you were going to Turkey at that time,… You told me before ^^ I’ll be uploading in the summer holidays as long as I’m home, but in July I’ll be gone for over 3 weeks, so I won’t be uploading at that time, but that’s still a long time till… This fic will be finished by then, maybe a new one to xP We’ll see though xP
Loove yah! ♥
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AhMin → Haha, GEE, GEE~ I was actually thinking about that song when writing that comment (even though I don’t like the song xP) Couldn’t get the song out of my head, I even danced the dance when I was skipping PE classes, and my friend thought I was more than crazy xP
Hahahaha! It seems like you know me too well! Almost scary… Actually when writing the Daesung part I had no idea who his hero was, but actually I had planned the GD-Daesung further into the story so decided to put it in like that! =D Haha, yeah… If my computer decides to die on me, I’ll for sure get sad. I’ve had my laptop since 7th grade xP (over 3 years only but still…) But it seemed to start all okay today, maybe it only was a small protest for being on too much xP*slaps myself for being so stupid* Haha, everything you mentioned about the Army show was thing I also loved! xP Your fantasy? You want to join in with Key and Jonghyun, or with Taemin and Donghae? Or all 4 of them? xP (And what do you mean by join in? hahahaha, sorry for being stupid xP ) Haha, imagine having Key looking at you with those eyes like he has in the poster somewhere else ^^ (sorry, being perverted xP) Haha, I wish to taste Jonghyun’s honey skin toooo! ^^ *LoL*
Loove ♥
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Nana → Haha ^^ Maybe we’ll just share Daesung too then ^^ (Since we have so much in common, and since Dae don’t mind sharing! Like with G-D, lol) lemon rated? *just looking plain stupid* Was my rated good enough though? =) Hahaha… You wish you were Dae’s Hero^^ (I wish it too though..-_-) Ah.. I’m from Norway (half German though) and my birthday is 18. February xP (Just like Changmin! xP) So, am I still your Unni? ^^ (Don’t mind being it though xP) Wah… You better take care of that hand!! I still want you commenting, I’ll be lonely without my other half xP *lol*
Saranghae ~ ^^ ♥
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Secret FanGirl → Hahaha! Yeah, lessons in seducing is less dangerous! ^^ (as long as Junus is still kind ^^) Hmm… Maybe baby~ (about the Junsu and Junho thing ^^) Taeyang was going to help Daesung get TOP and he was supposed to help TOP getting the one TOP had an interests in (which also was Daesung) But all of this will be better explained in a chapter.. Maybe the next one, not sure xP But nothing is settled yet.. ^^ Haha, lessons that pay off, maybe he’ll take more lessons xP (or maybe not) Thanks for wonderful comments! Loove ♥
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iluvhenrybb → Haha, okey then! Thank you~ <3 Haha, I guess I have to go back and read my own stories someday since I can’t remember them myself anymore xP Oh, if you write those one-shots, at least give me the link okay?! I’ve been thinking of uploading this story somewhere else since I got two hints for where to upload something, so maybe I’ll actually change the rated in this story and try to upload it at Shineee.net too… But don’t know yet xP Haha.. Deep down.. Pervs yep-yep! ^^ My computer just have to survive the summer since I’ll get a laptop from the high school for free when I start there, so that’s all I hope for! xP
Loove ♥
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EunKey404 → Haha, yeah, Dae and Tae wanted the same person, but now it seems like Seungri and Daesung wants the same person =Z Haha, for once I didn’t use someone random to be Dae’s hero ^^ (and no offence taken, I’m not asian, but I think it was funny though \_/) Haha, was the rated good enough? ^^ And yeeeeeees… I’ve read that fanfic, loved it! Both the first part and the sequel! http://www.winglin.net/fanfic/JJ24/ (link to the sequel! Heart vs mind ^^ Guess you can find the link to the first one there too so ^^) Hope it was the right FF though! xP Looove ♥
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Catty → Hahaha! I did continue? Happy now? =)^^ Was it really that bad that I stopped there? Maybe I should have continued after all, haha! Nono~ Funny torturing you ^^ Haha, so Daesung and G-D worked out better in the BOF parody? ^^ I’m sorry for the little 2MIN, but hope to have more of them in the next chapter ^^ Loove ♥
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Ayu → I still think it’s poor Onew, haha! =P Especially since I’m not looking forward to write what I’ll write about him in the next chapter xP But yeah, really poor Daesung, but isn’t he being a little too stupid now? Will Seungri really want to share G-D? xP Haha.. So what if I didn’t continued the rated part then? (psh.. Just joking^^) Anyway, Loove ♥
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Cindy → Tihi, yupyup, JongKey is hot ^^ =D But I’m still worried about my rated part xP Daesung found someone to make his pain go away, but now I’m really worried for all 3 of them! (Daesung, G-D and Seungri) And Onew will have a bigger part in the next chapter… So he is back ^^ Loove ♥
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Ida~ → Haha.. What about the rest of the JongKey then? If only the little in the last chapter made your brain go crazy xP I’m really worried about the rated part though.. I felt so weird when writing it xP Haha…
Now you know who Dae ran into ^^ Good or bad twist? =Z Haha…. Key can’t really hold a secret if he doesn’t get distracted and right now he is so distracted by Jonghyun he has probably forgotten the whole thing xP
Loove ♥ *hugs you*
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Kim HeeChul → Haha, what about this kind of JongKey action then? ^^ Whaaaat? Nooo… Don’t start dislike Taeyang xP I never meant to make him look bad, but he’ll explain himself in the next chapter or the next after that ^^ xP
Anyway, love ♥
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