Fan Fiction

Tempting like the Devil *Completed*

by Erii

Chapter 19

You guys are cheating again!?

*3rd Person Pov -
at the doctor*

«What?! Key is leaving me?»
«Noo~! But you can stay with Taecyeon, right?!»

Jinki's bottom lip started trembling and Key just pulled him in for a hug, his heart letting out a sigh. Why was he the one Jinki was so addicted to? Why couldn't it just be Taecyeon to begin with?!

«He'll cry again if you don't stay with him...» Key threatened and Jinki just turned to Taecyeon with big eyes.
«Don't cry!» Jinki said and stepped over to Taecyeon again, holding his hand.
«Big meanie!» Jinki just added and smiled to Taecyeon who suddenly started smiling.
«Me? Mean? Psh.. You really should be the one talking!» Taecyeon just answered. Jinki just looked up at him like he didn't understand it before he grinned.
«I was talking!» He just stated and smiled.

«So... We're rid of him?» Jonghyun whispered to Key and pulled Key into his strong arms.
«Rid of him..?» Key turned around and looked into Jonghyun's eyes.
«Yeah.. I mean.. You... we.. He's going to stay with Taecyeon, right?»

Key started laughing and hit Jonghyun playfully.
«Let's get back then! You owe me something, remember?» Jonghyun stated and Key took the shade of deep red.
«Pervert!» Key just said and pouted.
«Oh, really?! I guess I have to punish you too! Just think of it... You just kissed Onew!»

Taecyeon dragged Jinki out of the room, for the first time in a long time he wore a smile.
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«You have ice cream?» Jinki asked and Taecyeon just dragged Jinki closer, grinning.
«Enough to feed an elephant!» He just answered.
«Chocolate?»
«And strawberry!»
«Yummy!» Jinki commented and started jumping up and down next to Taecyeon.

Taecyeon opened the door to his home and Jinki ran in and jumped on top of the couch with a thrilling laughter.
«Wah.. so soft!» Jinki just laughed and started jumping up and down in the couch.
«Do you want some dinner?» Taecyeon asked and Jinki just nodded his head.
«Noodles!» He just answered with a smile and stuck his tongue out like he was thinking of the food already.

Taecyeon chuckled and disappeared into the kitchen. Jinki reminded him of how he used to be like when they still were children, but at that time Taecyeon would always bully Jinki. Jinki was the girly, spoiled child. Of course he used to be jealous. If Onew turned into how he used to be as a child, maybe that was why he was so afraid of Taecyeon.

«TAEC~?!» Taecyeon almost dropped the things he was holding in his hands. Jinki sounded like he was in pain or something.
«What?!»
«Your TV doesn't work!»

Taec had just reached the living room and he wanted to just go and smack Jinki for scaring him like that. Suddenly loud music started banging from the loud speakers.

«That’s not the remote to the TV..» Taec just answered and gave Jinki the right remote, turning off the music.
«Ooooh...» Jinki just answered and sat down in front of the TV with his legs crossed searching through the programs.
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Taec sighed and looked at Jinki's sleeping form next to him on the couch. They had watched television until Jinki fell asleep and Taec had just turned of the TV, just watching the sleeping Jinki.
«Aw... Onew... I miss you!» He stroke the side of Jinki's face and sighed. But a little of the truth was...
«But I don't mind Jinki... He is sweet!»

Jinki's eyes fluttered, but didn't open.
«Wouldn't it be a little too cliché if you just opened your eyes now and was normal?»
Jinki just sighed in his sleep and Taec chuckled.
«Nope, I guess I have to survive with Jinki! Onew is just mean anyway.. And dangerous for himself!» Taec just smiled, and he knew if Onew heard him now he wouldn't be able to just lie still with his eyes closed.
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The clock hit 12 strokes, and Jinki opened his eyes. He looked over to his side and saw Taec sleep there. His heart started racing, and he knew what he should do. He couldn't stay here anymore. He had to get away. Get away before it was too late!

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*Somewhere else, earlier the day*
~Key Pov~

«I don't have to come and watch over Onew tomorrow?!» Taemin just yelled out in happiness and I had to hold the phone a meter away from my ear. I had just called Tae to tell him the good news.
«Yeah.. He's with Taecyeon again!»
«Woah.. Great! By the way.. Minho wants us to meet up tonight.. Maybe watch a movie, maybe order some food. You know, boys evening!»
«We'll be there!» I stated jumping up and down. It had been a while since the last time I had some fun. The entire Onew thing had somehow pulled me away from the rest of the world.
«Yah! Don't sound so happy! I never agreed to the idea, but does anyone care about me?! No!»

I just laughed and shook my head.
«See you..» I just said before I hang up.

«What was that?» I turned around and saw Jonghyun stand behind me, smirking.
«Taemin! We're going to have a boy's evening tonight!»
«We?»
«Yeah.. You're coming with me stupid!»
«Who said I would agree..?»
«Yah!» I just pouted and crossed my arms. «Don't start you too!»
«What..?»

I just turned my back to him and walked the way the park was. We were still on our way home.
«Hey! What did I do wrong? Of course I'll join you!»

I just chuckled and started running. Jonghyun was mine! All mine!
«Key! You're just joking.. Aren't you?!»

I turned around and stuck out my tongue.
«Ooooh.. You're so DEAD!» Jonghyun started sprinting after me, and I just whined in happiness as I ran down the street, nearly crashing into an old lady.
«Mianheeee!» I just yelled as I continued.

*Crash*

I heard the loud crash and stopped and saw how Jonghyun was laying on the ground covered in plastic bags and everything else the lady had been carrying.

«YOUNG MAN! WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING!?» The old lady was sitting on her ass, waving the walking stick at Jonghyun. I couldn't help it anymore and pulled out my phone and took a picture before bursting out laughing. Jonghyun just stood up, bowing a thousand times before helping the lady up. I just walked closer and sat down with my legs and arms crossed, just watching as Jonghyun was picking up milk cartoons, dog food, and garbage lying on the road. He would send me a few death glares once in a while, but I was happy just watching.

«Young people these days! Why are everyone in such a hurry?! Time goes by, it doesn't help hurrying. Jeez, when I was young we had manners! I'll tell you, when we saw old people on the street we would stop and be polite, asking if they needed help, and what do we get when we get old?! People running us down! Parents these days don't even care to teach their children how to behave! If I had a few things to say in the matter...» The old lady stopped the nagging when Jonghyun stood up and held out the bags.

«You've already said quite a lot..» He just muttered and it looked like the lady was about to explode.
«How rude?!» She actually hit Jonghyun, and now I didn't think it was funny anymore.
«Yah!» I stood up, but then she pointed at me.
«And you.. First ALMOST running me down, then just sitting there laughing. What kind of behaviour is that?!»
«I was just going to suggest..» I looked at Jonghyun and smirked. «That this guy running you down would help you carry your shopping to your home!»

Jonghyun looked like he wanted to punch me, but I just smiled cutely.
«Hmm.. Fine!» The lady loaded Jonghyun with the shopping and I just waved at him as he was dragged down the street.

While wandering back to Jonghyun's home I started wondering.. What would Jonghyun do to me when he got back?!
I stepped into the house and it was all silent. I sat down in the kitchen and waited for Jonghyun to come back. What if he didn't even come back?
The door opened and Jonghyun stepped in. It looked like a raining sky was hanging over his head.

«Jonghyun?» I asked as I stepped out in the hall where he was standing. He totally ignored me and walked up the stairs.
«Yah~! I'm sorry!» I followed him, but he just dragged down the stair and disappeared up to his room, but he didn't pull them back up so I just found out it would be okay if I followed him.
«Jong...» I couldn't say another word because Jonghyun had pulled me up and thrown me over on the bed.

«You think it's funny, eh?!» I just nodded and tried to look cute with the puppy eyes, but Jonghyun just threw the blanket over my head.
«That won't help!» He just said and I pouted under the blanket.
«So.. What will you do to make me forgive you?!» He asked and I just stuck out my hand from the blanket and waved for Jonghyun to come closer.

I pushed the blanket off my face and just stared at him and wiggled my eyebrows. Maybe I should use some Junsu-power...
«Aw.. Don't be mad at me!» I pulled him even closer and started playing with his fingers. He just looked at our hands and I just moved his hand up to my face and kissed his palm. He suddenly pulled his hand away and just shook his head.
«I'm not mad! I'm pissed off!»

I just pouted before I jumped ontop of him, pushing him down on the bed.
«Sorry~!» Then I kissed his lips, and I just let out a sigh. I liked his lips the best, and I would always like his lips the best!
«When...» He started, but I interrupted him with another kiss. «were..ah..» I had put my hands under his shirt. «We..omg..» I just removed my hands and sat up.
«What?!»
«Ah.. Never mind!» With that he pulled us around and threw me down, grinning his body on top of mine.
I just moaned and couldn't get enough. How did Jonghyun manage to make me to a pervert?!

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«WHAT!? We're that late?!» Jonghyun yelled from inside the bathroom and I just nodded, totally forgetting that he couldn't look through walls.
«Yah! I tried to ask you when we were supposed to be there, but you didn't even care to listen!»
Something fell down inside the bathroom, and I just rolled my eyes.

Who would be able to care about a question like that while doing ''it''?!

«Finished!» He just said and came out of the bathroom, finished showering. Of course I had showered first, so now we could go. He just grabbed my hand while going out, and I couldn't stop smiling. I loved it when Jonghyun held my hand, or.. I loved everything he did to me...
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«I said 6 o'clock.. What’s up with coming now?!» Taemin just asked and crossed his arms, not letting us in.
«It's only 8...» I just answered and tried to use puppy eyes on Tae, which I knew wouldn't help.
«I've been stuck here with an awkward Seungri, a hyper GD flirting with Daesung out of all people, and Minho fell asleep... So I'll tell you... 2 hours have been like hell!»
«Sorry~!» I hugged Taemin and earned a smack on my head.
«Like that would do.. Come in you stupid!»

*3rd Person Pov*

Taemin dragged Key with him into the house while Jonghyun was just following, smiling.

«Yoo~!» GD jumped up when the rest entered.
«What movie?» Jonghyun just asked and just like Taemin said... Minho was sleeping on the end of the couch, while Seungri was just twinning his hands next to GD while Dae was clinging on GD.
«Hostage.. The guy with the long black hair is so creeping me out!» Dae answered and pulled GD down next to him again.

Taemin had pulled Key with him into the kitchen so Jonghyun just found a free spot on the couch next to Seungri and looked at how a guy was throwing home made fire bombs on the tv screen.

«Aah.. I'm going to find Key!» Seungri just announced and disappeared too.
Jonghyun was slightly feeling out of place. If this was what Taemin had meant, he could so understand that he wanted Key to be here.
«So we just ordered some pizza! Key choose so don't kill me if you don't like it!» Taemin just yelled from the kitchen and Minho flew up from the sleep and rubbed his eyes.
«Pizza...?!»

«Food addict!» GD just said and wiggled his eyebrows at Minho.
«Wo! TOP and Taeyang is here!» Taemin suddenly whined and ran over to the door pulling Taeyang and TOP into the living room.
«Oy! Did you bring the cards?!» GD just asked and TOP threw the cards over at him.

«WHO IS UP FOR A ROUND OF ''LIER''?!»

The room turned quiet and it seemed like everyone found something else to do.

«I'll join!» Key suddenly said and came running into the room with a bowl filled with candy.
«Then.. I guess I'll join too..» Jonghyun said and wiggled his eyebrows at Key.
«Psh.. Can't let Jonghyun win!» Minho just said and shook his head and found his place around the table.
«Like you would make a difference!» Seungri just said and sat down on the floor on the other side of the table.
«I'll be on Seungri's team!» Daesung just said and flashed a smile before sitting next to Seungri.
«Let's show these children how to do it!» TOP just said and pulled Taeyang over to the table.

Taemin came last into the room and he just pouted when saw that everyone was pressed together down around the table, no more room for anyone else.
«I'll just..» But before he could say anything else Minho had pulled him down on his lap. «You'll just sit here with me..» Minho continued for him and kissed his ear. Taemin didn't know what to do when everyone was looking at him so he just waved cutely and sent Minho a death glare.
«Uhm... How do I play this?» Key just asked and everyone just looked at him.
How come he was the first one to join when he didn't even know how to play?!

The game started and they had all the fun. Outside it was getting totally dark, and it slowly started raining. It was all silent and the only thing that could be heard through the entire neighbourhood was:
«YAH! YOU GUYS ARE CHEATING AGAIN!?!»
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Somewhere else in the town a boy was walking against the rain, his hair lying wet down his face, covering the pained face. The rain wished away the tears, and the person just stumbled forward until he reached the house he had been looking for. He rang the bell, but no one opened and the house looked all dark. The boy just sobbed before he slowly let himself slide down next to the door. If this was how it felt to wake up again, he would rather sleep forever, but on the other hand.. People liked the one he been the past days....

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I'm soooo sorry for not updating earlier! Really~
But I've had the weirdest writers block ever! I knew exactly what to write and what was going to happen, but I just couldn't write it! That was like the craziest thing ever!
So to get my inspiration back up I think I watched like a hundreds of BL movies.. (Pathetic! LoL)
Even watched Frozen Flower, but that only made me depressed, haha.. Hong Lim was such a bastard, and the king just too adorable, haha! xD
Plus I thought I would have so much free time now I don’t have school, but things are happening all the time xP
Anyway.. Seems like the writers block is over so.. I'll even upload a special chapter later today! =D
Hope you didn't miss me too much ^^ (Just joking!)

Anyway... My readers are the best!! LOOVE <3 ♥

Special chapter up next! =D
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Comment replies:

Leechie → Heey~! I’m so glad you finally commented! All of my stories? Tihi.. Then I’m happy! ^^ =D Haha.. You’re just too nice =) Hehe.. The main reason for writing SHINee fics was because I didn’t find any I liked xP (Glad I was able to make some good SHINee fics at least!) I’m really sorry the chapter took so loooong! But at least a special chapter is coming very soon, and there it’s more 2MIN! =D I know I don’t have much of them =( But I hope you’ll like the small part they’ll have in the next chapter! =D Loove ♥
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EunKey404 → Uhm.. Sorry for confusing you! But it was all Seungri’s thinking… He was getting so confused because he got this strange feeling, but he didn’t want to believe these feelings because all he was, was Dae’s bestfriend! (Better now?... guess not =( ) Haha, don’t worry.. I like answering questions, so lets start with the first one. Onew slapped Key because he turned back to the evil part of Onew, and that part can’t really stand Key. (Even though Jinki believes he loves Key, it’s all hate in some way… I know it’s confusing, but it’s supposed to be like that, haha! xP) It took so many kisses to change Jinki because Jinki had more control. He wasn’t tired or sad.. So it was harder to make the Onew side dominate. It didn’t work with Taecyeon because Onew have decided to make love into hate because he can’t trust love cause there is no love without hate. And it wasn’t the old Onew he changed into. His personality just split up. Into a kind one with all the positive sides of Onew (Jinki), and then the other side was all the bad sides, and all his flaws. So it was even worse than the old Onew! So… I think I answered all the questions, even though I’m not sure I made you any smarter… Haha, LoL! Anyway.. I love answering questions! So don’t mind ask some! =D Loove ♥
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dorkyy_azn0221 → Haha, Thaaaanks! =) Jinki and Taecyeon seems to be okay.. But now.. Why did Jinki leave Taecyeon again?! What happened? Tihi^^ Haha, glad you liked the 2MIN part! More 2MIN in the next chapter! =D Oh, and thanks.. again! Loove ♥
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Secret FanGirl → Hmm.. I won’t say anything more about the threesome than,.. Look for the special chapter ^^ xP Hmm… Jinki/Onew just left Taec again, but there is a reason for everything! xP  Just wait and see^^ Psh.. 2MIN is funny. Oh, and there will be 2MIN in the special xD Loove ♥
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TheBlobMaster ^^ → Oh.. I’m glad you like the threesome thing! There will be more about them in the next chapter! =D (So, we’ll see what happens!) Haha.. Actually I was thinking about making the cooking thing into something rated, and maybe let Key join in and… NOO! xP (I wasn’t planning on that.. but maybe that would be a great idea..*slaps myself*.. Nope.. That won’t happen, at all!) Haha.. Do I look that cold hearted that I wouldn’t make Taec and Onew end up together? (Ok.. well.. I just separated them,… again! But.. Everything happens for a reason) Aww.. Thank you, but really.. I don’t think my writing is that good! But thanks anyway! Made me really happy! (and feeling bad since I used soooo long time to update=( ) And the Taeyang+TOP couple will come up in the special chapter! (like promised, LoL^^) Loove youuu~ ♥
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Ayu → Haha! I don’t have to be listening to Suju- sorry sorry, to be singing that. People can’t say sorry to me anymore without me starting singing xP (Even my friend that doesn’t like any asian music starts singing sorry sorry when people apologize in English xP) I don’t mind that you missed 2 chapters.. Especially not now when I haven’t been updating for a week, and I just read your newest chapter and didn’t comment -_- (But just wait…! You killed Seunghyun! I’m so going to let you hear about that.. I’ll comment sooon! T_T) Haha, I knew you’ll like Onew in the end! And the Seungri + Daesung.. more about them in the next chapter ^^ Loove ♥
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AhMin → Hahaha.. So the threesome will be weird, but at the same time fun in the “intimate moments”? Psh.. Well.. there will be more about them in the special chapter though! xP Haha.. I’m not angry, and don’t worry! I won’t rape  you either! ^^xD It just came out in the wrong way xP If you ever get into SM entertainment you have to tell me everything happening!! =D (And I’ll be your backup vocal!... Haha… Just forget that.. I was going to say backup dancer, but I forgot that I can’t dance xP.. But seriously.. You sing?)
Hahaha! A priest getting rid of the demons inside Onew.. Genious…-_-..or not xP Maybe I am the doctor.. Never thought about that, eh?! So, maybe I’m smart after all! (Okay, scratch that.. since the doctor is a male xP Or, no.. It’s me.. under cover ^^) Oh.. You liked my (the doctor) funny face? xP (Hahah.. Okay, I’ll stop xP) But.. Taecyeon had Onew/Jinki! But then he left again -_- (But everything’s got a reason!^^) Ah… Maybe that’s the reason for my writers block (i) Sorry ~~! (I though ending school would be great.. It sucks.. But I’m never happy, when I still had school I wanted it to end, now I want to go back xP) But I’ll try t write a lot now that I got my brain back! (You don’t even want to know what kind of idea I got that made me get over my writers block.. But I’ll tell you when the scene appears in the FF xP)
Haha.. Yees I saw that SNSD is coming back! And you’re right.. I’m no anti! ^^ (It takes to much energy to be an anti, and I had so much fun with the Gee song.. Almost made my friends go crazy because of that song xP But other that that.. I’m not dying for their type of music yet, but maybe they’ll make something good now ^^ Plus I don’t know them well cause I haven’t seen a show with them.. Any good you can recogmand?) Haha.. Authors tend to make scenes like the cooking scene? xP (Failure then…) Haha.. Whatever.. xD But adorable is okay ^^ Loove ♥
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hofasho22 → Haha^^ But now you’ve had almost a week to prepare yourself, so next time there’ll be a rated part you won’t die or anything ^^ (Didn’t have any of that in this chapter though xP) Haha.. Half of him is yours! ^^=) Haha… Jinki went back with him, but he left again.. So Taecyeon might need your shoulder to cry on, so be prepared^^ xP Haha, more about the threesome in the next chapter though.. LOOVE ♥
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Cindy  → Tihi.. Actually since Seungri is so confused.. There will be a little more about that in the special chapter thingy..! =D And yeah.. They are all so selfless. ^^ (Don’t worry.. You’re not the only one feeling bad xP) But yeah.. Seungri was GD’s first, but the last one to be informed about the threesome thing, and GD asked Daesung first T_T Yup.. I feel bad for Taecyeon too! I just made Onew go back with him, and then Onew left again =( Haha.. Seems like everyone kind of understood that the 2MIN wasn’t doing it, so glad at least you were expecting something else ^^ Sorry for the long wait though,.. Anyway.. Loove ♥
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cookiesxcream → Haha, thaaaank you! I graduated middle school! =D (Or at least I think that’s the English name ^^) So we’re the same age? =D Nice ^^ You were in Disneyland….. *envy you* Never been there xP Haha.. I like the “pretty crew” name.. Don’t really know what to call them, but guess I’ll use that from now on! =D Haha.. You have a teddy bear names key junior too? Aww. Kawaii! ^^ Haha.. There will be a little more about the threesome in the special chapter, but not that happy though =Z I can’t cook at all, and my pancakes always look horrible! xP Tihi.. Maybe the doctor is a little crazy too ^^(noo.. But who wouldn’t be dorky near a dorky Onew? xP) And writing about Onew is quite easy! Because it’s fun writing about someone that is that cute! =D It only worked when he kissed Key because the bad Onew personality hates Key xP
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sokachangmin → Aaaah.. Stupid internet, or wireless thingy or whatever it was! xP Anyway.. You don’t have to say sorry! =) It’s me who should say sorry since I haven’t updated in like… a week or something? But.. Anyway.. (Glad you commented even though the wireless connection was being an ass!) I’m glad you liked the idea! =D Thanks! =D Yees.. Onew is so cute! =D Haha,… You really knew it wasn’t a perverted 2MIN moment?!  You suuuure? (Nono.. just joking!) I graduated junior high school (or middle of what you name it in English..) I know it isn’t like a big deal.. (the graduating) but here it is, haha! xP High school or college?! Do I look that old ? xP Haha… joking again! xP
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nene → Aww.. You really read all my other stories too? #1 author?? Haha.. Seriously?! Sooo happy! =D ♥ Yees, Key is cute and Jonghyun is hot! ^^=D Thanks for liking my FF’s! Really happy right now! Really sorry I used so long to update.. But two updates coming now ^^ =) Loove ♥
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Kim HeeChul → Tihi.. The threesome is getting a bit weird now that Seungri is so confused.. And in the special chapter.. Things will get more complicated for them xP Haha.. Yes, Onew does have split personalities xP (And yes, he is weird^^) Yeah.. I pity Taecyeon too! =Z
Anyway.. Loove ♥
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