| Fan Fiction |
by Erii
«TAEMIII...»
«Shhhh! Please?! It'll only take 5 minutes, or less! Then you can kick me out the window again!»
«What do you want, Onew!?»
«I just want to talk to you...»
«I don't want to hear it... Don't want to hear it! Definitely don't want to hear it..!» Key took his hands over his ears and shook his head. He didn't want to hear that he had lost Jonghyun back to Onew again. He didn’t want to hear any of it..!
«Key..?!» Onew stepped forward, his facial expression looked kind of hurt.
«Key!» Suddenly Onew was hugging him, and all Key could do was to look up at his face. He wasn't sure which Onew he was hugging right now. It wasn't like Jinki. He would never be so serious, but it wasn't Onew either. It was like a golden middle way between those two.
«You are my favourite person!»
Key's eyes widened and he just looked at Onew like he was turning crazy.
«You know… When I was just lying there, refusing to wake up, I heard you! Your voice was like the light in the dark..» Onew smiled and let go of Key, dragging him back up on the bed.
«But Taecyeon was wrong, I mean about the friend thing! I'd loved to be your friend!»
Key just continued to look at Onew, at a loss of words.
«I realized that you were right. I have had all the most amazing people in this world caring for me! I just wanted to change for them! Guess I changed too much, eh?!» Onew nudged Key who almost jumped up in the air. Now that Onew sounded like old Onew, Key was getting slightly scared. Would Onew hurt him!?
«Uhm.. I guess I was quite a handful! Sorry!»
«N—no.. It was fun!» Key just said and nodded his head, trying not to get too nervous. They were soon getting to that part he didn’t want to hear about.
«Actually, I saw it all, I mean everything that happened while I was “Jinki”, but it was like I was only flouting outside my body, out of body experience. Oh, and… sorry for nearly raping you..» Onew just chuckled and made a face.
«When did you.. I mean.. come back?» Key just asked and now he wasn't really that scared anymore. Onew was lying on his stomach on the bed, and he was chuckling. Good sign, right?
«At the doctor... But.. I was so scared! Scared that I would have to face everyone’s hate again, and then be left alone to myself. I just wanted to pretend! But at the same time I wanted to be with Taecyeon. I just love him so much!»
Key just chuckled and lied down next to Onew.
«But I couldn't stay with Taec. He knows me too well! He would realize it quite fast that I was only pretending, so I had to get away before he found out and would be even madder at me... You know... He gets pretty scary when he is angry! But forgot that Jonghyun know me almost as much as Taec....»
It got silent, and this was now the part Key didn't even want to hear about.
«You saw us, didn't you? Me and Jonghyun?» Key just nodded and looked away. He felt hurt again.
«Sorry Key~!» Suddenly Onew was hugging him, burying his head onto Key's neck. «I know Jonghyun loves you! He told me he was thankful, cause because of me he was able to get you!»
Key looked up now. Not understanding how Jonghyun could say that and then make out with Onew afterwards.
«As for the kiss.... He just wanted to prove to me that he really used to love me. He just helped me getting my spirit back up! So.. Please forgive him, okay?! We didn't do it!»
«You didn't?» Key just asked and looked at Onew with sceptical eyes.
«Yah! That would be too mean towards you.. And Taecyeon!»
«Oh.. OH! Taecyeon!?» Key just sat up.
«He doesn't know yet.. I don't know what to say to him!»
«You don't know?! You love him, right? Tell him!»
«He was going to leave me again! He wanted to push me back to TOP and everyone else, just so that he could leave without feeling bad... I don't want him to leave me!»
Key just looked over at Onew. Taec never said anything about leaving to them.
«You sure he was going to leave?»
«...no...» Key was shocked when he saw a tear run down Onew's face. «He..*sniff* never said it to me directly! He probably wasn't even going to leave me, and now I've hurt him so much. Who would want anyone back that hurt them so bad..!?»
Key just rolled over on his back and looked at Onew.
«If I was you, I would have gone back to him and told him you loved him no matter what happened, and that you don't want to be apart from him!»
Suddenly Onew started chuckling and just looked over at Key with a smirk.
«Then.. Why aren't you running like mad on your way back to Jonghyun and telling him that?!»
«Uhm.. Because... Uh...»
«See! It's not that easy! Only in your mind!» Onew said and poked Key’s head.
«Fine!» Key crossed his arms and pouted. «If I go back and tell Jonghyun,.. Will you go and tell Taecyeon?!»
Onew just nodded his head energic and grinned. Now he was helping both Jonghyun and Key, but at the same time he felt bad because he had to use Key to get his courage up to see Taecyeon again.
«WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS!? Get out of my house you sick bastard!!» Taemin stood in the door, anger written over his face.
«Oh..» Onew just said and hid down behind Key.
«Uhm.. What is he doing on your bed? Key.....!?» Taemin just stood there, confusion written over his face.
«Yah! We're just...»
«If you think you'll feel better after sleeping with Onew because he did it with Jonghyun, I can tell you that..»
«YAH! TAEMIN!?» Key stood up, kind of disappointed. What was his friend thinking about him!?
«He only came to explain... And now we're going on an apology mission!»
«You... You two.. You two are friends?!»
«Yup...» Onew hugged Key from behind and grinned. «My favourite friend!»
«OMG.. Key!? What have you manage to get yourself into now..?!» Taemin just hit his forehead. Key was just unbelievable. Being angry and hurt one second. Crying himself to sleep, and then suddenly being best friend with the guy who hurt him.
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«Come on~! If even you can't do it then...»
«SHH! I'll do it! Give me 5 seconds!» Key sighed before he turned back to GD.
«Fine, do it!» Key looked up, making a face.
«YESS!» GD and Onew took a high five and GD lifted the eye liner. «Jonghyun won't be able to resist you!»
Key just rolled his eyes and sighed again. He couldn't believe he agreed to let GD style him, but Onew was going to be styled too, so...
«He'll be so ugly...» Taemin just commented and Minho just laughed.
«You want to be styled too, eh?!» He just joked and Taemin sent Minho a death glare for saying that.
«You would have to kill me first!»
«Fine.. When you die.. I'll come and make you look pretty!» GD just yelled out in happiness as he prevented Key from looking at himself in the mirror.
«Seungri, can you go and pick out an outfit for Key?» GD asked Seungri who had been sitting in the corner all the time, just watching. He just nodded and walked into GD's huuuge walk in closet. He started looking through the clothes and found a pair of stylish jeans and a tight t-shirt with a ''V'' neck. He found a black jacket and some stylish shoes before he walked back to the rest to ask GD if it was okay..
«Oh, by the way.. Why didn't Daesung come?» Minho suddenly asked, figuring out something was missing. For once he didn't have to squint his eyes to be blinded by a foolish smile.
«He didn't pick up the phone..» Taemin just answered dryly. Seungri dropped the clothes and bent down quickly to pick them up again, looking a bit uncomfortable…
Key was finally dressed up and he was turned around to the mirror. He just stared at himself with a pout before he finally found out that he didn't look that bad. The eyeliner was drawn on so nicely you couldn't really see it, except the fact that his eyes were shining brightly with thick eyelashes.
His cheeks had a small blush and his lips were wearing a little lip-gloss making them looking even juicier. The clothes fitted his body perfect and made him look so stylish.
Onew just grinned and put an arm around Key. Wearing almost the same clothes and the same make-up, and Key had to admit Onew was really stunning. No wonder so many had fallen for him during the time!
«We are pretty! Aren't we?» Onew just asked and kissed Key's cheek, almost making Key freak out.
But when Onew started laughing, pointing at Key's cheek, Key slowly started understanding why Onew did it. He now had a kiss mark of lip-gloss on his cheek.
«Yuck...» Key just commented as he dried it away making a face.
«Cute!» Onew just commented before he walked over to GD.
«Let's go then!» Taemin just said and stood up. It felt weird for him seeing Onew act so nice and all that towards Key. For him it still seemed to be wrong...!
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«Good luck!» GD just announced as he winked at Key. Key just pouted and looked up at the house. The rest of his friends were going to wait just around the corner.
«We won't look! Don't worry!» Seungri just said and smiled a little.
Onew just hold both of his thumbs up, smiling like a fool. He for sure hadn't lost his Jinki cuteness!
Key slowly turned around and started walking over to the stairs. When he told Onew what to do, everything had seemed so easy. Why should it be any harder for him?! Actually.. He did nothing wrong. It was Jonghyun that should be apologizing. Not the other way around, so.. Why was he so nervous?!
He rang the bell and waited for someone to open up the door. It took some time before the door was slowly opened and Jonghyun stood there just looking at Key. His eyes flew over Key's body and the clothes before they rested on Key's face.
«Uhm.. Jonghyunnie~» Key started, but Jonghyun placed a finger on Key's lips.
«Don't say anything... I'm sorry!» Jonghyun pulled Key into a hug, squeezing all the air out of Key.
«You know I love you so much!»
«Jonghyun...» Key's chest felt so warm now. Like something was finally pulled out of his chest making him able to breathe again. He was back with Jonghyun. He was in his arms, and everything felt so good! He was just too happy!
«I'm sorry too.. I mean, for not listening! Not trusting you...»
Jonghyun chuckled and kissed Key slowly.
«Let's start to trust each other fully then!» Jonghyun just said and smiled a cheesy smile.
«Mmm!» Key just said and this time around he was the one kissing Jonghyun.
«Awwwww...» Their friends announced and Onew just smiled. He knew it would turn out good for them, but he was still a little sad for creating troubles for them. Seemed like he was the one making trouble all the time...
«You look great!» Jonghyun just commented to Key, and Key blushed a little. «But...» Jonghyun started whispering into Key's ear. «I think you look even better without any make-up at all... after a hot round of sex..»
Key just gasped and slapped Jonghyun's arm before turning around, his face totally red. He was so happy it was so dark that no one else could see the horrible blush.
«Pervert!» Key just said before he walked down to the rest of his friends who were only laughing. They hadn't heard anything, but from the way Key acted and the way Jonghyun was having a breakdown while laughing, they kind of figured it out themselves.
«Come on, Onew!» Key just grabbed Onew's arm and started pulling him away from the rest. Onew was just chuckling and he looked back at Jonghyun who was just smiling a thankful smile.
*Onew POV*
I just let Key drag me with him, and I couldn't help, but admire him. He actually did it, and now he was coming to me when everyone was making fun of him. I just pulled him in for a hug, and he just playfully hit me.
«Yah! You're not Jinki anymore.. Stop hugging me..» He just whined and looked up at me with those big eyes. Truth was I liked to hug him. He was so soft and warm, and even if he pushed you out of the hug you still felt warm afterwards. It was like he was able to give some love to everyone around him. No wonder everyone liked Key!
«My name is still Jinki..» I just answered and tried a pout. «And I like to hug you..»
Key just rolled his eyes and then everyone was back around us.
«Next stop is.. Taecyeon!» GD just announced and I felt how the bad feeling came back to me. What if Taecyeon suddenly rejected me? What if he told me he would leave now that he didn't have to stay here and look over me?
«Wah.. You look pale!» GD just commented before he threw an arm around my shoulders. «Maybe we should call TOP...?» Minho just asked, but I shook my head. I was done relying on everyone else, and especially him. I hurt him too..!
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We reached the mansion and I just looked up at the house. The only light came from the kitchen and I just heaved a sigh before I looked over at Key. Jonghyun had followed us and he was now standing there hugging Key like it was the last time. They really looked good together. Key blushing while Jonghyun was looking at him with such tender eyes. It almost got me jealous.
«Earth calling Onew!» GD just yelled next to me.
«Huh?» I just turned to him with raised eyebrows.
«I've been talking to you for a while now..» He just said and crossed his arms.
«Oh.. Sorry, about what?» I hadn't heard anyone talk at all. Maybe because I had been wondering what to say to Taecyeon. What had he been thinking when he found out that I left him?
«Fine.. No one ever listens to me! I'll take my revenge now!» GD just said and lifted his hand up in the air and did the hwaiting thing before he walked up to the door and rang the bell before anyone could stop him. But... I wasn't ready. I hadn't even been able to think out anything else to say than that Taec's ice cream was the best I had ever tasted and that I actually messed up the two remotes, and wasn't acting stupid at that time.
The door opened and Taecyeon stepped outside, his eyes landing at me. He looked like he wanted to know what was happening. I just lifted my finger and pointed at GD.
«He... He... He...» I was at a loss of words. And that was when I ran and hid behind Key, without any reason really.
«Uhm.. What's going on?» Taec just asked and looked over at us. No one answered and just looked over at me.
«Well... Onew?» Key whispered and turned to me.
«Oh.. Y—yeah.. We're here because.. Your ice cream is THE BEST!» I held my thumb up and everyone looked at me like I just turned crazy, maybe I was... «What?! It's the truth!»
«Omg.. I'm going home!» Taemin just announced and tried to drag Minho with him, but Minho held him back.
«Onew was going to tell you something...» Minho just told Taecyeon and Taec looked over at me with raised brows. Damn, why did he have to be so good looking?! I didn't deserve him!
«But... It's no fun anymore!» I just said and crossed my arms. «I didn't even get to ring the door bell..» I ran up to where Taecyeon was standing, not looking into his eyes as I pushed him inside the door again. «Let's try again!» I closed the door and then I heaved another sigh before I pressed the doorbell.
The door was opened again, and Taecyeon just starred at me like he was just dreaming. His cute confused face was actually really funny.
«Our relationship... Just like now… Something always went wrong, I wasn't the one allowed to make the step and ring the door bell. Someone would always have to be there and do it for me because I would always push everyone away from me. So all I want now is that we step back in, close all doors and tries again. Like I just did... With me being the one to ring the bell to open the door to your heart» I turned away and sniffed. «All I want to know now.. Is if you're willing to open the door and let me stay with you..?»
Taecyeon was silent for a bit before he tilted my head up so that our eyes could meet.
«Onew...?!» He just looked at me for a long time before he just suddenly smiled and pulled me into a hug.
«I can't believe you said that..» He just whispered and kissed my cheek before he pushed me out from him again.
«Who are you, and what did you do to my Onew?!»
I just pouted and hit him, and now I was starting to cry too. How was he able to joke about it!? Here I came and thought he would be angry at me or hate me, and now he was smiling like an idiot.
«I take it all back! All I said..» I just said and sent him a death glare.
He just laughed. «So you are really back, eh!? I knew it!»
«Huh.. How?»
He just pushed me out from him and laughed.
«Well, I remember this one time you had to sleep over at my house. You were 5, and in the middle of the night you woke up and were so scared! Even though you knew you lived in the neighbour house, you still just lied there and cried for your mom until she came and got you. So I found out that Jinki wouldn't leave me just like that if it weren't for the fact that you were back..»
«You big bully! It was your entire fault that I was scared back then! You woke me up, telling me someone tried to choke you and that it most likely was the ghost living up at the attic!»
«You know.. I'm going to remember everything you just said to me! I'll never let you forget how cheesy you just were!» I just pouted and looked behind me at my friends grinning. Key just waved at me and made a kissing mouth pointing over at Taecyeon. I just rolled my eyes and turned back to Taecyeon. He just wiggled his eyebrows and pulled me in for a kiss. It was the sweetest kiss I had ever gotten from him and it sent butterflies all the way down to my toes.
«Come on.. Step into the door to my heart..» Taecyeon just joked and held up the door. I just hit my forehead and followed him in. Why on earth didn't I just say sorry and something else? Why had I to be so romantic..?! Taecyeon didn't have the romantic vibe at all.
«Thanks...» I mouthed to my friends before Taecyeon closed the door, turning to me.
«By the way.. I missed you!» He pulled me into his arms and I just hugged him tight. «Without you.. There is something missing!» He just said and kissed me once more. «What you said... I'm not going to remember it so that I can make fun of you.. It's so that I know that at least once you really told me what you felt!»
«Yah.. Haven't I said it before?!» I just asked and looked up at him. He just shook his head.
«I love you! Happy?! Love, love, loving you is what I was meant to do!» I just flung my arms around him and jumped up in his arms.
«Overly happy! Love you too!» He sat me down and I walked away from the door only to trip over something when entering the living room, and fly down on the ground almost ruining my face. I sat up, rubbed my elbow and turned to look at what I tripped over.
My eyes just widened and all the happiness I had felt this evening was like flying out the window. Tears started forming in my eyes.
«You...?!» I just asked and looked up at him. He looked back at me, and it looked like he was going to cry any moment too.
I looked at all the bags that was nicely placed in the door, and especially the bag with the ''I love LA'' written on it.
«Onew, I'm sorry.. But there is something I have to tell you...»
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Heeey ~ !!
Well.. Actually I was going to upload this like a lot earlier today, but better late than never, but I actually have a reason, and that reason is why I’m soooo looking forward to writing the next chapter ! =D
So, I stumbled over the DaeRi intimate note, and hahaha! So funny!!
I was like eating pizza, (something I regret now though..) So thanks to Daesung’s hilarious walk in the beginning while being blindfolded I now have a nice spot with pizza sauce on my computer screen that just won’t come off T_T (But it somehow reminds me of Daesung so it’s okay… LOL!)
Anyway.. And then when they commented that Dae and Ri acted like they just had a fight I was like thinking.. “Aaaaaah! I know whyyyy~ !” (Haha.. Not in real life, but in my own FanFic world) And then I was thinking that maybe Taeyang got them into “IN” just to make them make up for the fight! And what GD said at the end in his personal letter was soooo how I think he is in this fic. Caring for both Dae and Ri! =D
So many parts in there that I loved! =D
(I don’t know when it was originally aired, and most likely I’m really late seeing it.. But it was the best! =D )
Ah.. sorry for spamming you about this, but I’m kind off hyper right now ! =D
(Hahahaa.. Almost can’t wait till I’ve gotten uploaded this so that I can start writing next chapter, even though the chapter won’t be like good or anything… xP)
MY READERS! <3 LOOOVE ♥
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Comments replies:
brilliance11 → New Reader ~~! Wah, happy! =D Hihi,.. Thaaaank you for liking my stories! =) I’m talented? Tihi *blushing* Thanks! Onew will stay alive! ^^ No one dies in my fictions! (Uhm.. I take that back, but not planning for anyone to die.. yet! ;) ) Taec and Onew are together again, but again… What am I doing to them now!? xP Haha, yees, Key is cute and Jonghyun cool! Again, thanks for reading! =D Loove ♥
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Cindy → Haha =D I love the looong comments, so I’m happy every time I find one from you! =D But.. I didn’t update for a long time =( It was like almost a week, and already that made me feel so bad, and now I didn’t update yesterday… Ah.. It’s killing me xP (I hate not being able to update everyday, but I’m trying!^^) Soo glad you checked yourself! =D I also mostly depend on the e-mails, but every time I update I have to scroll down the page so I see it if the stories I read have updated. Anyway.. Haha, the things happening in my fic are addicting?! ^^=D Well.. Now I got Onew to express his feelings, and Taecyeon too.. And then I ended it with another cliff hanger .. xD Tihi.. Yees.. Now I’ll have the threesome as the main in the next chapter, soo.. We’ll see about Dae and Ri’s relationship ^^ Well, yeah! I realized that every time lately I make the rest of the “crew” meet up, Taeyang and TOP aren’t there, like in this chap.. So I’ll definitely put more of them after this! Haha, Yeah.. JongKey was really cute, but now that Jonghyun can be the pervert, everything is perfect again! =D Looove ♥♥
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Secret FanGirl → Haha, puddle jumping ^^ (I’d like to see that in real life xP) Hihi.. Yeah, Onew is slowly getting sorted out, but he is like the main problem creator in this fic! xD He isn’t the main person here, but still everything that happens here is mostly because of him! He is the drama creator! Hahaa~! xP No FF without Onew! xP Yes, 2MIN is wonderful.. Loove ♥
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EunKey404 → Yes, Onew’s been awake since back then ^^ And yes..! Haha.. Key was getting a little too confident in his relationship so I thought of pulling him down from his mighty horse.. (JUST JOKING!) But it HAS been a long time since he was jealous the last time. (I actually got the idea for the whole JongOnew thing from the name of one of my chapters. “You are cheating again?!”, and I thought it could be misunderstood!) Anyway, I’m off topic.. Uh… Yeah, it was Onew in the window! First I was thinking of maybe having it to be Junus(2pm) since he is the Casanova and should know how to open windows and then help Onew up, but decided not to make it too confusing xP Haha… Soooo,… Did I answer your questions in this chapter.. Or is there anything you want to know? ^^=) Haha, Looove ♥
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dorkyy_azn0221 → Haha, yeah ^^ I’m like checking my comments like all the time now since I don’t get any notifications, so happy every time I see one! =D And yeees, you were right! I can’t split up JongKey!! So of course they are back together now, and Jonghyun only wanted to make Onew feel better! Soo.. Everything is gooood between them now! =D Haha, kidnapping Key?! Why didn’t I think of that..?! LoL! ^^ (Guess the way I did it was rather boring then xP) Loove ♥
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jennsanngggg → Taeyang is soo smart and tactic! Seriously, he never stops to amaze me! xP I think everyone is a little perverted deep down! (So I don’t mind being a pervert, haha!) Haha, jumping in puddles with Key would be fun! =D Haha, yeeees.. Touching Key when he is wet! (It was the entire point^^ ) Haha.. Yeah, poor Key^^. But he was saved by Onew so… xP Don’t be mad at Jonghyun though! (He was just trying to.. Okay.. Fine.. Be mad at him, I’m tired of explaining his behaviour, lol xP) YEAA~ Taemin is manly and tough! =D (He can’t be cute aaaaall the time^^) Minho is also a bit tough in this fic, so I guess they match well! ^^.. Loove ♥
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cookiesxcream → Your friend is named Key!? Haha, so fuun! ^^ Awww…*blushing, again* My fic isn’t thaaaaat good! =Z Buuut, Muaha! Thaaaank you! =D *claps my hand for no reason* Jonghyun is a biiiig pervert!! =D Haha, I guess it would have been very uncomfortable for Key doing it outside, but since Jonghyun is a pervert he would just have found a dark alley to do it in xP And, yeaa.. Since Onew was so scared he managed to lie pretty well! (Even though he didn’t act when he messed up the remote to the tv xP) Jonghyun was just.. It wasn’t like cheating, but at the same time.. It was pretty mean =| .. I also thinks action movies are boring xP (So I’ll support Key there xP) Psh.. Buuut.. It was just Onew in the window, making up for what he did, so now JongKey is baaaack! (Wasn’t that bad, or what?! They were just separated for one chapter ^^) Looove ♥
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Catty → Auch.. *Tries to dodge the angry punches from Catty* Yah! I only had JongKey separated for one chapter..*sniff* And everyone keeps hitting me x( *Cries.. but fails and starts laughing* And Onew made up for the mistake though! He is really nice,.. Really! *protects him* Haha.. All my friends say epic fail too.. ^^ Loove ♥
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Undankbar → Yeah, Onew is back to being Onew, but he is a lot happier and more like how he was supposed to be now! Since he’s got a little of his confidence back! =D And Jonghyun realized because he know Onew so well.. No use trying to trick Jonghyun^^ Another threesome!??!.. Haha, I’m afraid it’s enough with one threesome xP Loove ♥
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Ayu → Waaah! *Runs over to Jonghyun to protect him from mad Ayu with baseball bat* ..xP Jonghyun’s intentions were all good! Don’t kill him xP (Like you usually does to my favourites!!) Revenge? Huh?! If I had taken revenge, I would have made Key run out of the house in tears, a car coming towards him, and Jonghyun running after him, pushing him out of the way, and then DIE!!! (OMG, I’m still not over the fact you killed Seunghyun! LoL, I’m pathetic!) *Grab your pillow and hits you back* But, Yeeees, you’re right, you made up for it by adding JongKey in your! =D *Get hit by your pillow.. again* Yah! *Throws the pillow out the window* I already got hit! I get the point! I won’t break up the JongKey anymore! xP I’m not ignoring you! Hum.. I’m 16, birthday in February xP (But seriously, even if I’m older or younger, formal or informal language doesn’t matter.. We don’t have that in Norway.. We had it like 50-100 years ago though, but I don’t know how to speak formal at all xP I just speak my mind xP) And of you start talking formal English (Like Shakespeare) I’m afraid I won’t understand anything at all xP
Anyway… Loove ♥ (Oh, and I’m sorry for not commenting on your last chapter, but I saw that it was the end, so I’m saving it up.. I hate endings xP)
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hofasho22 → Haha, really?! xP Haha.. All it took to make your heart to explode was to make Minho say epic fail?! LoL! I guess I have to make him say that more then xP Hahaha.. Why on earth would the 2PM members be there?! Buuuut.. I was actually thinking of making it be Junsu xP (Just to confuse people, he would only be helping Onew getting in through the window though) Since Junsu is like the Casanova, he should know how to open a window from the outside ^^ Loove ♥
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Kim HeeChul → Hmm.. Yeah.. Jonghyun and Onew should’ve at least stopped earlier! AND checked the shirts! xP But I did clear things up in only one chapter, so now everyone is back to normal except for the cliff hanger I left again xP Haha.. Poor TOP, sounding like the sex lunatic.. And in this FF, he actually is the really good guy! xP I guess I have to go and change his image soon! Poor guy xD Yeees, he is HOT! ^^ =D Loove ♥
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Ida~ → WAH~! You’re back! =D How was it in Paris? Bought anything for me?*puppy eyes* (JK! JK!) I’m really sorry for not having more chapter for you when you came back, but I had this straaange writer block while you were gone =Z (Never leave me again xP, haha, lol!) And for the rated parts I promised you… Sorry, again~! But I will make more of them before it ends! ^^=D You cried?! Oh… (Don’t know what to say…. Sorry..?xP ) I think Onew is great! Haha… But I’m the writer, lol.. My opinions shouldn’t matter xP Yees. Taemin would be a great friend! Crying again? Oh.. I’m probably the worst person on earth, but it actually made me happy that I managed to kind of translate Key’s feelings into the FF! xD Thank you ^^ Wasn’t this chapter a happy chapter!? xD Onew is the drama creator in this FanFic ^^ (So even though he isn’t the main, everything that happens, is mostly because of him xP) Anyway.. Thank you~! Loove ♥ *Huuuugs you~*
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♥; DaffodilLoVeRx → Waaah! New Reader~~! Amazing! *Waves back like crazy, making the neighbours think I’m really crazy* .. Aww! Seriously, this is the 3rd time I’m blushing like mad today! Am I really that amazing?! Haha, lol! Anyway, Thaaaank you! <3 (But about the writes block.. I had one just a few days ago.. Didn’t update for a week, but it wasn’t a reaaal writes block.. I had all the idea, just couldn’t write it.. LoL!) Anyway.. Haha, Yees.. I love cliff hangers! =D *Loses my breath in that extremely tight hug* 2PM is loove, so had to add them in! =D And Junsu will actually have his own part soon! ^^ Haha.. I’m also very perverted (^^) But I know I don’t have that much perverted stuff in my FF’s xD Haha.. Recently Taeyang is my favourite in Big Bang so.. Yeees. He is so hot and sexy! He is also the smartest person I know about! He is just amazing!! =D *Grins like a fool* (Haha.. I’m really random too ^^ Always get off topic) Actually at first I didn’t think Seungri was that pretty, but now, I think he is reaaaally cute in his own way! =D Haha, I was tired of weak and cute Taemin.. (Not that I could ever get tired of him in real life though, since he is just naturally innocent and cute!) Haha, even though Onew is back now.. He is still cute! (I think! But LoL.. I’m the writer, xP) Psh.. Taecyeon and Onew will always be together.. or will they?! xO Haha.. I missed OnKey, so had to add some ^^ But since this story is JongKey, I should stop having all those OnKey moments.. Or should I?!(Muahaha *Thinks evil thoughts*) Taeyang and TOP isn’t that sex-mad, but since they started of as fuck-buddies.. Well, You can say it like that xD Tihihi.. Taemin IS taking care of Key.. (But as you said.. Only when he is not busy having sex with Minho! LoL!^^) Aww.. You really like my story that much? (Really touched) Thank you! *Runs after you and throw myself on top of you while hugging you* (Oh.. That sounded a little too crazy, never mind that.. My randomness) Super Junior in this story..? Hm.. I can like add one couple as a crazy couple on the street, like a tiiiiiny side couple. Which couple do you want? =) Haha.. You were a silent reader with your friend? Tihi.. Doesn’t matter, but I’m glad you liked that one.. (Say thank you to your friend! xP) Haha, yees, you were right! It was Onew ^^=D Yah! I looove looong comments! =D But as you see.. I’m also one of those who can’t stop talking. My comment replies always get waaay too long, but I can’t help it! (I just love my readers so much, and I really wanna show how much I appreciate them! xD) Yeah.. I have quite a lot readers =D I can’t really believe it! I’m just happy! =D Aww.. Thanks for being an amazing reader! =D
Looove you ♥
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Nana → Haha.. You liked the Jonghyun + Onew part that much?! Tihi! =D *smiles happily* Your poor sister! (I bet she’s wondering if she’s really related to you at all xP JK!JK!) Haha.. Aww.. Thanks ^^=) *Blushes for the 4th time today* But I’m not that great! xP But it was Onew ^^ Tihi, he is making up for everything! (But doooon’t kill him! He is really nice, really-really! xP) Rehabilitation for your arm? It doesn’t sound good =Z xP But I’m sooo looking forward to see you comment like you haven’t before… (Haha, LoL) Anyway.. loove yah ♥
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