| Fan Fiction |
by Erii
It was another early school day and the ''pretty crew'' was gathered up at the roof, or everyone except Daesung.
«Does anyone want to do my homework?!» Key just asked and looked over at Taeyang with a scary looking smile.
«And why do you think I would do it?!» Taeyang just asked and raised his eyebrows slightly.
«Beeeecause.. Hyung is the best!» Key flew up in the air, pointing his hand up in the sky.
«Sweet talking won't help you.. Just because you're too busy jumping around in bed with Jonghyun doesn't mean I'll do your homework!»
«Pleeeease.. Don't even mention it.. My ears!» Seungri clasped his hands over his ears and just sent Taeyang and Key a pleading look.
«Okaaay.. Weird!» Taemin just commented and continued to look in the magazines Daesung had left on the roof top.
«Isn't it a bit strange? I mean.. We haven't seen Daesung since the boys evening.. It's not like him. Usually he'll be clinging on our backs» Taemin said and threw the magazine away.
Seungri just dropped his hands and just lied down, looking up at the sky. A shadow covered his face and he slowly opened his eyes only to be looking up in Key's nose.
«Wanna help me?!» He held out his notebook for Seungri.
«No~ Are you crazy you creepy looking nose hole!?» Seungri just said and looked at Key like he just went crazy. Like it would ever happen that he was going to help Key with his school stuff.
«Seungri~! Why are you always so mean?!» Someone whined and everyone turned quiet and looked over at the door towards the person.
«Missed meeee~?!» Daesung just yelled happily and smiled.
«Awww..!» Everyone shielded their eyes and turned away.
Seungri wasn't sure if he was going to laugh or cry, but right now it felt like it used to feel before everyone got so caught up in love. Back then, the only one being madly in love was Key, and Seungri didn't even know what kind of gender he liked...
Daesung jumped over the floor and sat down next to Seungri, putting one arm around his shoulders, just like they used to do. Seungri just looked over at Daesung. His heart beating so fast, he had no idea what to say or do.
«D—dae....?»
Daesung just turned and gave Seungri a cold stare making him shut up. Seungri's heart fell to the bottom of his stomach. Daesung for sure hadn't forgotten it..
«You missed out on all the fun yesterday!» Taeyang just told Daesung and laughed a little.
«Ohh.. Really?!» Daesung flew up and ran over to Taeyang. «Tell me, tell me!»
To Seungri it looked more like Dae was trying to find an escape to get away from him without making the rest suspicious.
Key scooted closer to Taemin and looked over at Dae then over to Seungri.
«Don't you think Seungri is acting weird lately?»
Taemin just looked at them and then he nodded.
«Yeah.. He hasn't said one mean thing to Dae yet!»
«You think they had a fight?»
«Oh, come on.. Daesung is too stupid to start a fight...»
«Yah.. Did someone say I'm stupid?!» Dae looked up from the conversation he had with Taeyang and he glared at Taemin.
«Oops. Forgot you can hear everything..» Taemin just said and smiled a smile while shrugging his shoulders.
«We should leave them two alone and see what happens..» Key just whispered and Taemin nodded his head.
«YOO~» GD entered the roof with a cheesy smile, and Taemin just stood up and walked over to GD pulling him in the door again. Making everyone except Key look in shock. Key just walked over to Taeyang and started pulling on his arm.
Both Seungri and Dae just looked at Key when he pulled Taeyang away. Key stopped pulling on Taeyang and Key, Taeyang, Taemin and GD was gathered in the stairs behind the door just peeking out at the boys.
Seungri just looked up at Daesung who just sat there not saying or doing anything.
«Have you...» Both of them started at the same time, but stopped. «You first...» Seungri just said and looked away.
«Never mind..» Dae just answered and started scratching his head, looking away again.
Taeyang just looked at the two out there then back to Key and Taemin.
«They had a fight?!» He just whispered and Key shrugged his shoulders.
There was a looong silence before Daesung suddenly sighed and turned to look at Seungri, but turned back again. Like he wasn't sure what to say.
«This is getting boring.. I'm leaving..» Taemin just whispered and turned around.
«Seungri.. Do you really like me!?»
Taemin stopped and ran back to his spot where he had been looking.
«This is more like it...» He just whispered and Key rolled his eyes.
Seungri looked over at Daesung, and he knew the answer, but what was the use saying it?!
«Why did you kiss me? The first time and the second if you don't even like me...»
«Friends kiss and the first one was a joke. And if someone asks me to kiss them, I'll do it. Even if Taemin asked me to kiss him, I'd do it...»
Taemin just shuddered. «Like that will EVER happen!»
«You didn't have to! Why can't you at least act like you're normal?!» Seungri just asked and stood up.
«Then if I'm so terrible, how come you like me?!»
«Aish.. Do I look like I would fall for you out of my free will?!»
«What is there about me to like, eh?!»
«Nothing at all! You're stupid, selfish, and annoying!»
Daesung suddenly walked over to Seungri and grabbed his arms.
«Then.. stop liking me like that then!»
«Damn! I'm trying!»
Sudddenly Daesung leaned in and captured Seungri's lips. Kissing him with so much force that Seungri had to step back, their teeth clashing together.
«Yah.. What are you..»
Dae grabbed Seungri's hair pulling his face back, kissing him again. Seungri was left in shock not understanding anything at all.
«Shut up, and kiss me back if you really want me!»
Seungri just blinked his eyes a few times before he leaned in and this time Dae was gentle. He let Seungri suck on his lips; he even let the small tongue enter his mouth exploring him. He let Seungri take his arms around his neck. He let him push his body close to his, grinning down on him.
Daesung carefully moved his mouth a little, kissing back on Seungri before he pushed Seungri away from him, making Ri stumble and fall down on the floor.
He had been using all this time to think. Think through what he would lose if he rejected Seungri, and what he would earn by accepting him. He had been thinking of faking his feelings pretend to love Ri back. He had also thought of just forgetting it, going on like before, trying to make Seungri joke around with him like before. But in the end.. Why would he have to fake the feelings for Ri?
They shared everything, they had been friends for like forever and he knew Seungri like the inside of his pocket.
But in the end he had made up his mind. He already loved Seungri, and if Ri actually really still wanted him he was going to return the feelings. Now he knew that Seungri was serious.
«Daesung?!» Seungri asked and tried to sit up, he was so confused right now, and he was also slowly getting angry. This was the second time Dae kissed him, and then pushed him away.
«Treat me like a whore once more and I swear I'll....» He stopped in shock when Dae just sat down next to him and hugged him.
«I'm sorry...» Dae just said and pecked Seungri's cheek and smiled to him.
«Dae baby is growing up!» Taemin just whispered and he was actually smiling.
«Seungri and Dae.. I think I'm lost right now..» Taeyang just whispered back and shook his head. «Wait!» He turned his head and looked at GD. «If Seungri and.. what about you..?»
«Uhm.. Well.. I'll be right back!» GD just opened the door making Dae and Ri look up at him.
He just walked over to them and crossed his arms, pouting.
«What about me?» He just asked and pointed at himself.
«Aww!» Daesung just commented and jumped up and placed a kiss on GD's lips. «Come on Ri!» Dae just said and pulled Seungri off the floor so that he could place a kiss on GD's lips too.
«WHAT?! You and Daesung too!?» Taeyang just asked and pointed at them
«We share!» Daesung just squeaked and smiled so happily it was just scary.
Key just grabbed Taemin's shirt to not fall down and looked at them. How was that possible?! Wouldn't at least one of them be jealous? It would be like he and Onew had to share Jonghyun. Key would have died long time before it could have been even ok in his mind.
«Let's just skip school!» GD said and grabbed Daesung's hand, but he actually felt a little weird when Seungri held onto Daesung's hand instead of his. He wasn't used to share, but for his babies he would do it. He couldn't be that selfish!
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*Threesome*
«Won't this be weird?!» Daesung just asked and looked as GD removed the blanket from the double bed. Seungri just hugged Dae from behind, not understanding why he didn't feel like this the other times he had been hugging Dae.
«You don't have to, if you don't want...» Seungri just whispered into Dae's ear. «You know.. It's only for us mature..» Dae just hit Ri's head and took his arms away from his waist and lied down on the bed.
«Mature... Eh?!» He pulled of his shirt and made both GD and Seungri look at him. He started to undo his pants and both GD and Seungri just stepped closer to Dae, what was innocent and stupid Dae doing?!
«Just watch me..!» Dae threw the pants away and he let his hand slide down his chest and stop at the line of his boxers. Daesung lied down and arched his back up as he slowly took of his boxers. He started blushing, but didn't stop. The stares he got made him hot, and he just bit down on his lip as he slowly started stroking himself in front of both of them.
He moaned softly and arched his back a little, his member was getting really hard now, and he opened his eyes again and found GD look at his member with hungry eyes.
«Undress for me..» Dae just commanded and GD took of his shirt. «No..» Daesung just stopped them. «Ah, uh... undress each other!»
Seungri blushed as GD started to take of his clothes. He shyly started fiddling with GD's belt while he looked over at Daesung on the bed. He looked like a God there he lied, and Seungri had no idea what Dae did, but it he felt so excited right now. He just pulled on the belt and slid down GD's pants.
GD crept on the bed and pushed Daesung's hand away from his member, and started stroking it for him.
«Aah..» Dae just moaned and held out his arms for Seungri to come over to him. Seungri bent down and captured Daesung lips, taking dominance, exploring Dae's hot mouth, wrestling with his tongue. The small moans escaping Daesung's sweet lips, drove both the others crazy. GD bent down to Dae's member and licked the tip teasingly, kissing down the side.
Daesung flung his arms around Seungri, scratching his back, but Seungri couldn't feel the pain from Dae's nails. All he felt was the excitement, and he gasped out in shock when Daesung grabbed Ri's member stroking it.
GD engulfed Daesung's member and he bobbed his head down on it, tasting Dae inside his mouth, feeling how he filled him up. It hit the back of his mouth and he just bit teasingly on the member, giving the other as much pleasure as possible.
«I'm going to.. cu- huh?!» Dae said, but stopped when GD let go of his member and smirked.
«Not yet!» GD just said and smirked.
«Noo.. Rii, help me!» Dae just whined and Seungri bent down to finish what GD started, but GD just laughed and pushed Seungri away.
«Let's try something else!» GD just pulled Seungri in between Dae's legs. He made Dae suck on his fingers and slowly GD entered one finger in Dae. Dae just sighed and wanted more. He still felt the orgasm build up in him, ready to explode. All the teasing was just killing him.
«Ah... Just enter me already!» He whined and GD just lifted his eyebrows.
GD moved away and pulled Dae up in his lap while Seungri positioned himself over the entrance. GD kissed Dae's ear while Seungri slowly entered Dae.
Dae just arched his back making Seungri come deep into him. He started thrusting down on Seungri, his hand clasped around GD's member, stroking it. Seungri started moving, himself totally in ecstasy. The hotness around his member just wanted him to come right there.
«Oh.. Fa-ah-ster!» Dae moaned and Seungri fastened up. His arms supporting him failed and he fell down on top of Dae, just thrusting into him. GD leaned over and kissed Seungri.
Dae felt the orgasm wash over his body and he came out onto his stomach and Seungri’s. The scream in pleasure escaping his lips made Seungri tremble.
Seungri thrusted into Dae a few more times before he cum deep inside of Daesung panting. GD came in Dae's hand at the same minute and they all just lied in the same position for a minute panting…
The air was filled with sweat and the sweet scent of sex. Seungri slowly pulled himself out of Dae and rolled over on the side.
«I want to bottom forever!» Dae just whispered and earned a giggle fit from GD.
«I want to top...» GD just said and then he just pushed Dae out of his arms climbing on top of Dae.
«Then... What about another round?»
Dae started giggling and Seungri was pulled over at Dae, and he didn't mind as Dae started kissing him. The excitement started building up again and they laughed as they started their second round, switching the positions a little….
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*JongKey*
«Do you really think the threesome will work out?!» Key asked Jonghyun and took another bite of the apple.
«Honestly.. I don't know! It wouldn't have worked with me!» Jonghyun just answered and looked over the table at Key. He would never be able to see Key together with someone else. He was burning with jealousy only by seeing Key and Taeyang hug.
«I'd never guess Seungri would like Dae!» Key was still in shock, and he had been talking about the same thing ever since they saw it in the morning.
«How are they going to... you know... sleep together?»
«Key! Please.. I'm eating!» Jonghyun just pointed at his food and Key just smiled cutely before continuing eating the apple.
«I don't think Daesung will be able to..»
«KEY!?» Jonghyun just rolled his eyes as Key just jumped in his seat looking over at Jonghyun.
«Whaaat?!» He just asked. «I was just going to say that I don't think Daesung will be able to keep up with Ri and GD!»
«GUYS!» Taemin, Minho and Taeyang came running over to their table.
«It's about Taecyeon!» Minho just said and Taeyang continued.
«TOP just left to see him at the hospital!»
«He was found knocked out, taped to a chair in his mansion by the house maid...» Taemin told them.
«And... Onew is missing..»
«Say what!?» Key dropped the apple. «He is missing?!»
Jonghyun just closed his eyes, feeling so frustrated…
«Taped to a chair?! What have you done now Onew..?!»
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Rated threesome^^ … I’ve never written that before =Z Was weird, ehe..hehe..hehe..haha! *Blushing*
And I thought normal Rated was embarrassing xP
Daesung is naaaughty^^
Onew..! -_-
Oh.. And I just want to tell everyone that this FF will be finished on Tuesday, since that’s when I leave for vacation to Germany and I don’t want to leave the story and hiatus. Buut on the great side, I’ll be uploading everyday from now on till then! Maybe even two chapters some days cause I have more to put into this FF before it ends! =)
MY READERS! Saranghae YO~ ! ♥
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Comment replies:
Undankbar → Haha.. I can’t end it yet ^^ (Have more planned, and even though not everyone can have a happy ending, I like happy endings! xD ) Haha.. shooting Taecyeon wouldn’t be any use right now. Someone already knocked him out xP Haha… The only problem is that Onew is missing -_- Hahaha…You really-really want another threesome couple, don’t you?! xP We’ll see.. If they find Onew!^^ Loove ♥
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EunKey404 → Haha, spazzing walk! I can’t get enough of it too ^^ Hahaa… I just really love messing up the chapters by ruining the ends! xP I wasn’t that late? Ah, happy! xP Haha, 2PM Junsu is just… *happy sigh*… xP But he’s gonna get his own part in this fic soon too, so ^^ Loove ♥
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hofasho22 → Ah.. So that is where Onew ran off to.. To cry on your shoulder xP LoL! Haha, but it seems like Taec got his punishment ^^ xP Yes, they are very hot! And don’t worry ^^ Junsu will get his own part in here soon! ^^=) Loove ♥
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Ayu → So. Is TaecNew really together?! xP (No~~) But, I’m not angry at you anymore for killing Seunghyun! ^^=D He’s alive in my heart.. (OMG! LoL!) I remember everything I don’t need to remember.. That is just the way it is xP You’re older.. Fine.. UNNI ~~! ♥ (Haha.. I almost called you Oppa by a mistake, lol! xP) *Gets hit by the pillow, Erii: Yah! How many pillows do you have!?* I’m going to comment on the last chapter soon! Aaaand, of course I’ll comment on the sequel too! I just need to get that far.. I have to get up my spirit so that’ll be able to read the end first ^^xP This story will end on Tuesday -_- Since I won’t be able to update while being in Germany.. Hahaha! If I get to hit you as much as I want with that pillow, you can kill my favs! xD (Or.. by second thought.. You better not!) Loove ♥
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DarkMecha82 → Haha, thanks! =D So, Now Daesung and Seungri is settled, so now the only thing left is Taeyang and TOP getting back on track and Onew to come back to civilisation and Taecyeon to be okay ^^ Haha.. I actually don’t think TOP looks that much like a sex-maniac (Uhm.. I might take that back again, haha ^^) Aww.. Thanks =) Oh, and I just read your first chapter! =D (I was praying for it to be yaoi xP And it was some yaoi in the first chapter, soooo, so far I really like it!) But I’ll comment there now and tell you what I really thought ^^=D Again, I didn’t update for 2 days -_- Buuut.. Now that I have so much to write before it ends I guess that won’t happen again! =) Loove ♥
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dorkyy_azn0221 → Heartbreaking JongKey ending?xP No, that wouldn’t really be me, buut.. It’s not over yet.. No one knows what really will happen xP Haha, glad you liked it! =D Taecyeon didn’t get to leave -_- Now Onew is the one missing =( Loove ♥
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Ida~ → Haha, If I first made you cry, then smile, then what did I make you do today then? xP (LoL^^) Haha, glad you like Onew now! =D But.. Now he’s missing and Taecyeon was sent to the hospital =( Poor Onew! =Z Haha.. Thaaaank you! =)<3 *Gives you a “Jinki-hug”* Loove ♥
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Catty → Happy endings are the best! (But who said it was the end yet? ^^) Hahaha… So it was you that taped Taecyeon to the chair?! =O (JK, but actually I got the idea from you ^^xP) I watched the SUJU Intimate note first, but.. I actually though Kangin and Sungmin was close! xP Don’t know why, but Hankyung and Eunhyuk got me laughing so much in that episode, and Heechul too of course, and Sungmin is sooo cute! xP Loove ♥
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Kim HeeChul → Everything was okay, until Onew had to go and do something stupid again xP And agaaaain a cliff hanger xP So, in the next chapter we’ll get to see if Taecyeon actually was going to leave Onew or not ^^ But since Onew is the one missing, it seems like he is the one who left now =(
Loove ♥
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TheBlobMaster ^^ → Yeah, Winglin haven’t sent out mails for quite some time now, so I got like messages for all the comments I had gotten for a few days in like 5 minutes.. I thought my e-mail was going to get a breakdown xP (Not sure if it’s totally fixed now or not though…) But at least the threesome has gotten everything sorted out by now! =D Haha.. And there I had Onew all happy again, and now.. (I can’t believe I always make things happen to Onew to get drama to the FF xP) Haha… I’m not sure the chapter is good enough to be so worked up about xP Anyway.. Loove ♥
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AhMin → It’s okay ^^=) No one got the e-mail notifications.. So I got like all the mails for the comments in 5 min… That was kind of scary, haha! xP Anyway.. At least I have the threesome happy together..(Maybe a little too happy xP Making the poor author go crazy…) Haha, we’ll see about TOP and Taeyang soon ^^=D But right now… Again I made something happen to Onew and Taecyeon. Seems like I just won’t let them live happily, muahaha xD Haha, I love singing too actually, and I’ve just found out that I have almost the same voice as BoA xP (But I’m not training or anything, since I don’t have the confidence to become a singer, LoL! xP) Buuut.. I’ll wait for the crazy Brazilian boy believing he is Korean to become a singer ^^ (And if you ever become like very famous, maybe I’ll even write a FanFic with you and Taemin, and all your other fantasies xP) I’ll be your fan so you better become VERY famous^^ Haha.. I don’t know why.. But I keep thinking you look like Junsu(2pm) Have noooo idea why, especially since I don’t know what you look like xP The scene I talked about haven’t appeared yet ^^ But I think it will in the next chapter =Z ..
I saw the SNSD MV, and yeah.. I actually liked Genie! (except the “DJ, put it back on.” That just annoys me every time it comes, don’t know why xP) Uhm.. I like 2ne1’s song Fire.. (The only song I’ve heard from them xP) And I guess I like them since I look like Minji xP (But.. I actually really do! I only need Korean eyes xP) But that’s like the only reason, and fire too.. =P Hahaha.. Good luck with Taemin! As long as you let me have Key or Jonghyun you can have Taemin! LoL! Haha.. I’d like to have a friend like that too.. Haha, the only Koreans at your school is girls and a weirdo. That’s bad… Girls are boring! xP Haha, the weirdo is nice but, haha, lol! He sounds funny! But at least you have some Koreans. At my school there isn’t even someone from asia at all! Aww.. You sound like such a good friend towards them! It’s cuuute!^^ Too bad you’re on vacation, you should call them xP I’m happy for you! I mean the grades, but what to expect.. You’re so smart! And I know you’ll get top grades next year! xP (But I’m not sure if the grades are good or not((lol)).. Here 6 is the best and 1 is fail.. isn’t germany different?) Wait.. If you get top marks you can go to a Korean uni?! Whaaa.. Then I shouldn’t have a prob, lol! (Suddenly happy…)
About that quote.. I actually don’t know where I got it from. I wasn’t really planning on making Onew say anything, and then… I guess there is someone else inside my head being genius! =D Hahaha! Thinking physiological things in the toilet xP Actually I’m painting the veranda recently, and that is sooo boring I keep thinking of ideas for the FanFic! So in the next chapters I guess that’s what I can thank for the ideas xP Haha ^^ Loove ♥
(By the way.. Is it okay if I add you on msn?)
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cookiesxcream → You know.. You’re lucky I just checked my comments page before updating a new chapter, or else I wouldn’t have been able to reply to your comment in this chapter xP Haha, I’m 16 =D (and you?) Haha, no, obviously it wasn’t that easy xP Haha, I think Key looked really good wearing make-up! xD Jonghyun was the one being mean so he shouldn’t even have a reason to forgive Key xP But.. Jonghyun is a good boyfriend, so ^^ Hahahaha… Nooow I get it.. You were the one who hit Taec with the bat so that he got knocked out and then Catty(another reader) taped him to the chair! (i) xP Pooor Taecyeon! xP
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