Fan Fiction

Tempting like the Devil *Completed*

by Erii

Chapter 28

Tempting Devil (The end)

*3rd Person Pov*

«GD.. Are you angry?» Daesung just asked as he had to run to keep up with GD and Seungri.
«No..» GD just answered, but didn't even look at Dae.
«Then.. What is it, since none of you even care about me?» Dae just asked and stopped, pouting.
Seungri looked over at GD, but GD just shook his head and continued walking.

«He'll come..» GD just said and Seungri just followed him. They started running and finally they reached GD's home. Seungri disappeared up to the bedroom while GD started putting out the candles leading way up to the bedroom. He left a red rose just inside the door and smiled, hoping he was right… Daesung would come!

Daesung just stood left all alone in the school hall. He had no idea what was going on, and why suddenly both GD and Seungri seemed to be angry at him. He just pouted as he started walking out from the school, kicking small stones along the road. Somehow he ended up in front of GD's house. He just looked at the house then back to the road then back to the house. Was it worth a try?
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Minho turned of the TV, even though it earned him a whine from Taemin.
«Yah! I was watching that!»
Minho just smirked and threw the remote across the room, making Taemin sigh in annoyance.

Taemin looked down when he could feel a hand stroke his tight. He just looked over at his boyfriend and lifted one eyebrow.
«Do you know I love you?» Minho just whispered, and Taemin just nodded his head, finally smiling.
«I love you too, silly!» Taemin just answered and Minho grinned. He pulled Taemin up on his lap and kissed him softly on his lips, inserting his tongue in Taemin's sweet mouth.
They fought for dominance for a while before Taemin suddenly broke the kiss.

«Oh.. I almost forgot!» With that he ran out of the living room. Minho just dropped down on the couch. The trip wasn't before tomorrow and still Taemin had everything packed already.
«This..» He held up a lube, and Minho's expression just changed. Finally Taemin seemed to be taking with him something they would actually get to use.
«So that we won't get sunburned!» Tae just said and smiled an incredible cute and innocent smile.

Minho dropped back and let out a growl.
«Oh.. You don't want to see the rest? Okay, that's fine!» Taemin just smirked as he hid away the small bag with the sex toy's he just got TOP to buy him earlier.
«No.no.no.. Come back!» Minho just said and stood up from the couch. Something seemed fishy!
«Noo~!» Taemin just yelled before he started running.

After running around the house for what seemed like hours, Minho finally caught Taemin, and opened the bag. His mouth formed an ''O'' as he found the toys.
«You naughty little...» He started tickling Taemin, and they just rolled around on the floor.
«Wanna try them.. I mean testing them?» Minho just asked and sandwiched Taemin between him and the floor.

«You pervert!» Taemin just whispered and kissed Minho. «But no... We're saving them, plus.. We're meeting up with the rest later!» Minho just sighed, before he smiled. He didn't care about the sex, not that he didn't like it! But still, having Taemin meant a lot more to him.
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---Rated G-Ri-Dae---

Daesung slowly opened the door and saw the rose on the floor. He carefully picked it up and his eyes widened as he saw the candles leading the way up the stairs. He slowly walked up and Saw another rose lie on the floor in front of GD's bedroom. He just ran over to it and opened the bedroom door. The light was dimmed and the bed had red silk bed sheets, and a black blindfold was put on the bed next to a note.

''Undress yourself, wear the blindfold and get onto the bed''

Daesung just blushed and looked around to see if GD or Seungri was watching him. He just took of his pants and the rest of his clothes and slowly wore the blind fold. He felt his way over to the bed and crept onto it, letting the soft silk sheets caress his skin. It somehow turned him on. Not knowing and just wait.

He heard as the door was pushed open and as someone sat down on the bed next to him. Hot breathing washing over his body, before feather light kisses were traced down his chest and stomach.
He giggled as the person blew his air, and soft lips were placed over his mouth. At that moment he knew it was Seungri. His lips were different from GD's, and the way to kiss too.

Daesung lifted his hand and felt Seungri's skin under his hands. A giggle and then GD entered the room. GD crawled on top of him and kissed his tights, making Dae gasp out in shock.
«I wasn't angry...» GD just whispered and Seungri chuckled.

Seungri slowly removed the blindfolds again and Daesung looked at both of his boyfriends and blushed. They were all three naked now. GD's body glowing in the light while Seungri looked more like a God.

«We planned to make you a man...» GD just whispered and Dae's eyes widened. GD grabbed his member and started stroking it slowly, making him hard. Seungri just placed himself next to Dae. Dae got the point and rolled over to Seungri, nibbling his way down to his member. He started stroking it, playing with it, without ever looking away from Seungri's eyes. GD started stroking himself just watching his two lovers.

Dae kissed the tip of the member, before he engulfed it all. Not caring about anything else than trying to give the other as much pleasure as possible. He felt how Seungri's pre-cum came out and he just smirked as he let go of the member, just breathing some cold air on it.
«Y—yah!» Seungri stuttered and looked at Dae with eyes yearning for more.

GD joined in and pulled Seungri into his lap. He kissed Seungri's neck, bit on his shoulders, and massaged Seungri's ear flips slowly. Seungri just purred in pleasure, and Daesung sucked on his own fingers before he slowly inserted two of them into Ri. Ri just wiggled, feeling it as a little uncomfortable, but there was no pain.
«More...» Ri stuttered when the pleasure suddenly washed over him.

Daesung couldn't control himself anymore. He just wanted to know how it would feel to be inside Seungri. Without further warning he entered Ri with one thrust, getting his member all the way in.
Ri gasped out in pain and gripped the sheets as both the pain and pleasure washed over him.

GD hushed on him and kissed his cheek, lovingly. Slowly Dae started moving and the pleasure made him shiver. It was so different from being the bottom. He just moved in and out of Seungri. For every thrust the pleasure just built itself up. He moaned out the two names on his mind.
«Mmmh..» Seungri gasped a little as GD stared stroking him on top of it.

Moans, whispers, declarations of love. It was all in the air. Promises being exchanged. Pleasure, desire, lust, everything in a wonderful mix. It was an unforgettable memory. Sharing love together like that. Nothing could break them! Nothing!
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Taeyang scooted closed to his boyfriend while watching the movie. His hand slowly started stroking TOP's tights and TOP just smiled and pecked Tae's lips.
«Don't you want to..» Taeyang blushed as his hand brushed TOP's private area. TOP just shook his head and pulled Taeyang in for a kiss.
«I'd rather sit here with you in my arms!» TOP just whispered and kissed Taeyang again.
«Yah! When did you get so cheesy?!» Taeyang just asked and pouted.
«What?! I've always been like this!» TOP just said and shrugged his shoulders.
«Yeah.. Right...» Taeyang just mumbled and looked at TOP from the side of his eyes.

It had been over a week since they had sex the last time. TOP for sure had changed that, but right now Taeyang was missing the old perverted TOP. But one thing he knew for sure... During the vacation he would have to make up for the nights without..
TOP just saw the perverted grin on Taeyang's face and he just pinched Taeyang's cheek as they both bursted out laughing.

Happiness was more important right now!
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Jonghyun stumbled down the stairs in only his pyjamas. He was more walking in his sleep than anything else. He reached the door and cursed the one who couldn't stop ringing that damn bell.

He pushed the door open and STARED at Key who was just smiling at him sheepishly.
«Keey ~ !» He just whined, sleepy as hell. «The trip isn't before in 7 hours.. Why on earth are you here now?!»
«I want to take you somewhere...»
«Key.. I'm tired, and this time no one is dying.. I'm going to bed!»

Key just crossed his arms before he spun Jonghyun around and placed a feather light kiss on his lips.
«But I want you to come now!»
«I'm in my pyjamas!» Jonghyun just complained and just pouted, which totally failed. Key just shook his head and smiled.
«They look good on you! Now come!» He started dragging Jonghyun out of his house

Jonghyun just stumbled out after Key, blushing when they passed a couple that just looked at them weirdly.
«Key.. You couldn't even let me change clothes?» Jonghyun asked and shivered in the cold night air.
«Yah! You look great!» Key said and put one arm around Jonghyun, continuing to drag him down the street.

Key pulled Jonghyun up to the park and just smiled at Jonghyun.
«Remember you took me here to tell me your love for Onew?»
«I'm trying to forget...» Jonghyun just whispered, and looked at Key with loving eyes.
«Don't... That just proved what a wonderful boyfriend you are!» Key kissed Jonghyun before he just broke the romantic moment and pulled Jonghyun with him again.
«You pulled me out of my wonderful dreams only to take me to the park!?»
«Of course not, you silly!» Key just said and smirked when Jonghyun couldn't see it.

Jonghyun looked at Key, walking in front of him. He was dressed in a fancy looking leather jacket and blue pants. Somehow the jacket looked familiar. Had Key been visiting GD before coming to get him?!
Suddenly Key stopped and Jonghyun crashed into his back before he looked up at a sign.. an all too familiar sign, but there was no Shakespeare theme anymore.

«Angel vs. Devil?! Who calls their bar for THAT?!» Jonghyun just asked, and totally forgot he wore only pyjamas when Key pulled him with him into the bar.

«Why are we here?» Jonghyun just asked and looked at the room that was now totally different looking than before. Everything had great contrast between white, red and black.

«Because.. This was the first place you saw me!» Key just said and smiled to Jonghyun.
«Bullshit.. I saw you every day at school!»
«You saw me, but what did you see..? Nothing..!»

Jonghyun just smirked and knew Key was right. He had seen Key every day at school, but nothing more than the pretty boy who always hangs out with his strange friends. At this place Key had been magical, taking all of his attention, making him forget everything else.

«What a perfect outfit!» Someone suddenly commented and Jonghyun turned around only to see GD smirk, while TOP was lying on the floor laughing. All of his friends were gathered around a table, drinking juice from devil horn cups.

Onew had his arm around Taemin, and Taemin just snuck closer to his wonderful boyfriend. GD had his arms around both Seungri and Daesung, even though Dae had fallen asleep on GD's shoulder, looking totally worn out.

Taeyang helped TOP up from the floor, but even he was wearing a smirk looking at Jonghyun's white pyjamas with stars and hearts on.
Jonghyun just pointed at Key with an accusing look.
«Don't worry.. You look great!» Onew just yelled before his head was pulled under the table again.
Both Jonghyun and Key sat down on their knees and saw how Taecyeon was molesting Onew under the table.

They were all so happy, being with the one or two they loved, sharing everything, trusting, caring. Everything that was needed for a relationship.

A crazy looking man wearing big angel wings suddenly appeared and Key followed the man with a smile.
Jonghyun was pulled out to the front in front of the entire club and placed on a chair. The light was dimmed and suddenly Key stepped out on the stage wearing a devil mask. He started dancing, and Jonghyun felt how he again was pulled out of the world, seeing nothing, but Key. Key just purred before he walked over to Jonghyun walking around the chair. He was going to give Jonghyun an unforgettable lap dance.

Jonghyun let out a sigh in happiness, and just sat there all calmly as he watched Key, and he knew what Key was. Even without trying... Key was his tempting devil!

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Waaaaaaah... *Getting all emotinal*
So, I finally managed to finish it! I was afraid I wouldn't be able to, because I hate endings!
And, sorry for those who thought the last chapter would be about the vacation ^^
Anyway.. I hope you liked the end! (even if I didn't...)
But like this there MIGHT be a chance to write a sequel xP (Not sure I will though,...)

Anyway,....

MY BEST READERS! I SERIOUSLY LOVE YOU ALL ♥
I'LL MISS YOU SO MUCH!
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Comment replies:

Ayu → Yah! What did I deserve to first be hurt, and the pinched and then called a sassy brat?! O_o (Aww.. I’m hurt… *cries in my own corner*) Hahaha, no.no.no, just joking!! xD You won’t miss me? =( Hahah… I know you will, so don’t even try it! ^^xP Guns?! Woah.. Now we’re getting a little too dangerous here.. Like.. I only wanted a pillow war.. Where did the guns come from!? xO Haha.. Even TOP can be cute! =D Looove ♥
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hofasho22 → Haha.. I’m sorry, but it never seemed to be like some kind of bondage anymore -_- Buuut.. I did have that rated threesome though xD Hahaha.. What’s up with all this bondage?! Junsu+Hongki?! Nonono.. Poor Junho, haha! xP Well.. Key only got grounded for 3 weeks, and a little scolding… Not too bad, right? xP Anyway, Loove ♥
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Ida~ → Haha, I’m proud of you too! ^^ xP Well, as far as I know the only couple that didn’t get hurt in any way was 2MIN! =D And, now it’s been 2 chapters only happy chaps! =D And the ending was pretty happy too, right?! Haha xP (I suck at writing endings.. anyway..) The dad got into jail, and even if he gets out of jail he won’t be allowed to meet Taecyeon again for what he almost did! xP Haha.. I’ll miss you, Loove ♥
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dorkyy_azn0221 → Haha, I knooow~ All so cute.. Even TOP is cute! And yeah, he saved the day, and now he isn’t even that perverted xD Well.. I didn’t want anymore drama to happen in these last chapters, so just stayed with happy and cute couples! =D Loove ♥
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TheBlobMaster ^^ → Your knee is spassing!? Wah.. Don’t sound too good! Haha xP Well, I’m glad I managed to help your day from ending like shit, buuut at the same time.. I didn’t send them of to the vacation.. I ended it before, so sorry T_T
Haha.. Yes, TOP was the one who got shot, and he was the hero of the day, and he became close with Taeyang, and now he’s not even that perverted anymore.. Everything is good! =D Hahaha.. Snarky Taemin ^^ Yeah.. He’s kind of amazing! xD Haha, your own little party! *Can’t stop laughing* Feels weird being up at 4 am and having a laughter attack xP Ohohoh! No, I hadn’t heard when the solo albums will come out, but now I do~! Haha, I can’t wait! Really! =D And on top of that…. THREE!! WEEEEE! xP I wasn’t going to answer any more comments because I thought I wouldn’t be able to because my plane leaves in 3 hours… But since I obviously can’t sleep it’s okay! =D Haha! Yeah, you’re sooo right! I mean the jaebum+Jokwon thing! That’s so funny! xP Gotta love them! I agree with you about the Nickhun+Wooyoung thing! =D Haha, I spoil you? Naah, don’t really =) I’ll miss you, Loove ♥
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AhMin → Haha! But… Nordhausen is in the middle of Germany, not really north, but too bad you have to live that far away xP (I’d like to try one of those hugs .. LoL!) Haha, in Fanfictions I guess everything can happen that we wish for…But really, I don’t know where I get my ideas from xP Haha, I don’t know why.. But your granny seems like a lot of fun! xD Aren’t we all stupid when being happy!? (At least I am.. hahaha!) Haha.. Key was gone for like one week and 3-4 days or something, but still.. xP I forgot to add that he lost his phone earlier, so his mom couldn’t even call him xP (I was going to say he was grounded for like forever, but realized that would be stupid if he was going on vacation with his friends xP) He won’t tell his mom about Jonghyun xP He doesn’t have to.. She already knows.. She’s a mind reader,.. LoL! xP I know it was shorter.. But all 3 chaps together would be longer than any other chapter sooo… xP Haha! OMG! Stress gives you pimples? Haha.. Strange.. I never stress and still those stupid… ANYWAY… Haha! Yes… After you mentioned JoKwon, I had to find out more, and I almost died, seriously! He is hilarious, and then I watched the 2pm+2am Christmas thing again, and saw how alike they looked! xP Cuties,.. Actually I wasn’t sure how to spell staring.. Sometimes I do it right and a lot of times not xP But at least I know now! Thanks =) Hahaha! Nooooo… They’re not on jeju island.. Never planned them to go there either, but anyway.. It was sex and talking, and drinking JUICE! xP I’m being too kind xD
Loove ♥
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EunKey404 → Yes, I guess!^^ Haha, GD loves to make TOP angry! So then when TOP couldn’t take revenge, it was like the perfect day for GD! =D And, yeah, TOP is such a perfect strong guy, not even the medicine could keep him down, and now he’s not even that perverted anymore.. Now Taeyang is the perverted one! Hahahaha! Twist xP I had actually already written the chapter about Junsu when I read your comment! Then I felt happy that at least someone was waiting for that! =D Loove ♥
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bubble → Aww.. Thank you! =D Haha, I hadn’t really planned for more than Junsu+Junho in here, but they were just so cute I just had to get them in here, and I love every pairing with Nickhun in! =D Thanks for commenting! =) Loove ♥
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Secret FanGirl → You used to comment so much before, I thought you had left me xP Glad you didn’t though! =D Haha.. Yeah.. I planned on making Junho and Junsu together at some point, but so much happened I didn’t have the time for it before now xP Awww.. Thank you! =)<3 I’ll come back with a lot of new ideas and so on, don’t worry! =D Loove ♥
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Undankbar → Haha, at least I managed to fool you! (I mean about TOP being shot!) Tihi… xP Taec’s dad was taken by the police and he is now in prison for trying to kill someone, and if he ever gets out (which I doubt, cause I’ll make sue he stays there forever..) He won’t be allowed to get near Taec again! xD Haha.. Noo.. Onew really does love Taec xP (But if you want to believe the OnKey then.. xP) Haha, GD likes spending money ^^ Especially for his friends! =D Ah.. I’m sorry! I mean about the threesome xP But I put out a warning, so I guess you could skip it ! xD Haha, not really… I’ve only got family.. Uhm.. I actually don’t know about all of my family in Germany xP You’re in Shanghai!? xP Ah… But from Norway to germany, it’s not that far away, so of course the price would be lower.. But talking numbers. 45 euro to germany and 95 from one place in Norway to another xP Not that bad xP
Loove und liebe und Sarang ♥
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