Fan Fiction

Tempting like the Devil *Completed*

by Erii

Chapter 3

Your tempting Devil!

~Jonghyun Pov~

I had no idea why I was making sure my hair was perfect, and that my outfit was cool. I had no idea why I had butterflies in my stomach as I used some perfume. I looked at myself for the last time in the mirror before I was happy. I wore the black leather jacket and jumped on the bike standing outside my house.

I didn't want to bring my friends with me. How embarrassing wouldn't it be? But I had to admit I was nervous about going alone.
I put my bike away a few blocks away from my destination. I took out my phone and snapped a quick photo of me and looked at it. I still looked good. Then I walked over to the entrance.

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* 3rd Person Pov -
Key, Taemin, Daesung, TaeYang and Seung-ri*

«I can't believe that the people here don't get tired of that one song!» Taemin said and dumped down next to Key.
«It's because we are awesome~!» Daesung jumped up behind them, his smile making them squint their eyes.
«Yeah.. Yeah... Truly awesome!»

«Boys! You won't believe what I just saw!» Seung-ri was literally jumping up and down.
«Do I want to know?» Taemin asked and looked at Key who was trying out different ways to pout in the mirror.
«You don't, but I know of someone who does!»
«Hmm?» Key turned around with the newest version to pout.

«Your dream prince is here...!»
«WHAT!?» The pout was gone from his face and he looked truly shocked.
«And... He is alone!»
«NO?!» Key flew up from the chair and run over to the door and peeked out in the crowd. Just at the same table as yesterday. He looked so calm, and his hair was styled in spikes. He looked truly amazing.

«Guess he couldn't get enough of you!» Daesung put his arms around Key and grinned.
«He came back, Daesung, he came back!» Key turned around clapping his hands. He had no words to describe how happy he was.
«I told you... Go talk to him afterwards, okay!? I'll take your servings!»
«Aww.. DaeSung! You’re the best!» Key hugged him and he couldn't wait till he was finished with the song!

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~Jonghyun Pov~

The performance started, and again I couldn't take my eyes off them. It was like the lyrics got straight to my heart, like they became the centre of my world.
The song ended and I just smirked waiting for someone to start serving the drinks. I saw him already before he reached my table. He was already carrying two drinks.

«Hey!»

I looked up kind of shocked when he stopped at my table. I looked around before I finally met his eyes behind the mask.
«Hi!» I answered and smiled.

«Can I sit?» He licked his lips and I just nodded. Still I hadn't managed to figure out which of the pretty boys he was. Maybe he would tell me now!
He pushed the drink over the table and I looked at him. What purpose was this? I just took the drink and started drinking.

«I like you..» I choked on my drink and I had to cough to get the drink out of my lungs. That one was unexpected.
«I'll make you like me too!» I looked up at the guy and somehow I didn't feel shocked or disgusted, just amused.
«Oh, really? How will you make that happen?» I asked and winked while taking another sip of the drink.
«You'll see...» He just answered and winked back. «I'll be your temptation!»
«Oooo...» I let out a chuckle and the boy blushed. He was cute!
«I'll wait for my heart to change then..» I answered back, more joking than honest.

No matter how the tempting this boy was, I still was in love with Onew, and I was sure the boy knew very well.

«I'll be your tempting devil!» The words made me laugh again. I would love to see the boy try hard to make me fall for him.
«Then, let's see if you can overshine my angel...»
«I will!» The boy held up the ''V''- victory sign with his hands. «Hwaiting!» He just said and stuck his tongue out.
«Very tempting...» I joked and stuck my tongue out at him too. He chuckled and blushed again.
«I'll get better!» He said and smiled.

I leaned over the table and stretched my hands out. He looked shocked for a moment, but seemed like he would be okay with me touching his face.
I let my hands stroke down his cheek before I grabbed the mask and lifted it off of his nose. His hands flew up shielding his face, but I carefully removed them. He looked at me, the bright eyes looked more insecure now, but he was still calm.

So it was him... Key… I let his arms go and handed the mask back at him. To be honest I was a little disappointed. Why did it have be the most girly out of them that had to like me? Why couldn't it be the sexier TaeYang guy instead?
But I had to admit he was cute. The only thing was that out of them he was the one I had noticed the least. Why was it that he was the centre of my attention when I was here then?

«Key, my dear!» Someone came up behind him and put his arms around his shoulder.
«Daesung was running his ass off, so I told him to wash the dishes instead!» The guy pushed a board in Key’s hands and put a pen behind his ear.

«I guess I'll be going then!» Key stood up and smiled again. I just nodded, but when he was walking away I grabbed his arm and turned him around. He just looked at me with big eyes.

«How much?» I pointed at the drink in front of me and the one he just drank.
«It's on me..» He said and winked at me before he followed after the guy getting him.

I leaned back and put my arms behind my head and somehow I couldn't stop grinning. The guy was tougher than I thought. So he liked me, eh?

«YO, DUDE~!» I almost flew off my chair.
«Guys! Look who I found!» I looked up and saw G-D jumping up and down pointing at me. TOP and Minho came walking slowly towards my table. Now this was a bloody mess I had no way to get out off.

«So... What brings you here?» I asked and tried to act cool as long as I could.
«They serve beer to underages.. DUH! Do I need to say more?!» TOP said and sat down next to us.
«And you...?»
«Same reason...» I said and tried to look unaffected.
«Onew's been trying to reach you...» Minho said and sat down.

«CAN I HELP YOU!?» We all looked up and the guy panting smiled a smile that could make any heart melt. His hands were still wet like he just came from the dishwashing.
«A beer..» TOP said without showing any expression on his face.
«The same..» I said even though I already had one in front of me.

Usually I was the big mouth that couldn't keep a single secret, but for now I had to keep it in, or else I would get to hear it for the next years.

«Here!» The guy was back in an incredible speed. He just stood there when he was done and we just looked at him like it would make him go.
«Yes?» TOP asked him, kind of annoyed. The smiling boy was kind of scary...
«Smile!» He said and he managed to get his smile even brighter.
«Fuck off...» TOP just said and drank the glass in one go. «Get me another one...» He handed the glass to the boy and he just nodded, still smiling.

«Annoying light bulb... Gosh, I'm blind!» TOP said and rubbed his eyes.
«Love makes blind!» G-D said, but when the words escaped his mouth he suddenly jumped up from the chair, getting as far away from TOP as he could.
«I have to go the washroom!» Then he ran off with TOP's eyes piercing his back.
«Yeah! YOU BETTER RUN! Aish.. What a stupid idiot!» He cursed and shook his head.

I looked over at Minho and he was actually smiling too. G-D would always manage to get TOP annoyed, and.. It was fun every time!

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* 3rd Person Pov -
Key, Daesung and Seung-ri*

«So, how did it go?!» Daesung asked and threw his arms around both Seung-ri and Key. He was happier than he had been in a while.
«He was actually a lot nicer than I thought! I was sure he would laugh at me, but he only chuckled, and he joked with me! He even offered to pay for the drinks, but they were on me!»

«Oh, jippi!» Seung-ri said and sighed. «So when we don't have enough money to go on vacation it's because Key has bought drinks to his love!»
«What happened to you?» Key asked. Seung-ri had seemed strange after some point in the evening.

They were walking back home after cleaning up at work. Taeyang and Taemin lived on the other side of town so they had walked off already.

«Don't bother... » There was silence for a while… «You know that G-D?»
Both Key and Daesung stopped.
«YOU LIKE HIM?!» They asked in unison. Seung-Ri turned to them and sighed. «See.. Why do I talk to you guys at all?! Of course I don't like him...»
«Then what?» Key left Daesung's side and started shaking Seung-ri.
«We met at the toilet... He called me pretty...»

Daesung and Key looked at each other and smiled. Seung-ri had no self-confidence, and he never felt like one of the pretty boys, like he was the only one of them not being pretty and then suddenly G-D, one of the hottest boys at school called him pretty.

«I'm sure he meant your mask!» Key joked, but Seung-ri didn't catch the joke.
«I wasn't wearing the mask...» He just said and looked so serious again.
«I've told you before... Seung-ri is PRETTY!» Daesung yelled out the 3 last words, and Seung-ri blushed big time.

«Maybe he likes you!» Key said dreamingly. If only Jonghyun would like him too…

He still couldn't believe that he had dared to say those things to Jonghyun. He had no idea how to face tomorrow. What of he met him in the hallway? What if he talked to him?

But Key knew that he had to continue what he just started! He was going to win Jonghyun's heart in the end. He really was!

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Key has finally told Jonghyun! =O
Now the real drama is starting! Haha! =D
Thanks for reading! ♥

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Comments replies:

TheBlobMaster ^^ → Haha, thank you dear! =) There might be a crossover pair.. But what it’ll be in the end is more like a secret. I guess you have to keep reading to find out ^^ ;) I was trying to make the personalities to TOP, Jonghyun and those a little bit manlier, but I guessed I failed. Especially with G-D’s personality, haha! xP
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sokachangmin → The story is funny? Haha, I didn’t know I was able to write fun stories before I started writing about SHINee, guess they just inspired me with their stupid/cute behaviour x) Glad you like it! ♥
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Ayu → Yep, JongKey it is, or.. for the moment it’s just one sided JongKey, but doesn’t all my FF have a happy ending? xP Haha, yes, Onew suddenly being cold. It’s strange though, but it just comes natural to write him as a cold person now, strange. Maybe I got tired of writing him as the crazy nice guy =P By the way, when I was scrolling down winglin to update just now, I think I saw your name. Are you writing a story? Tell me and I’ll go read and comment! =D
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Cindy → As you might have noticed, I changed it from “writer Pov” to “3rd person pov” =) Haha, I didn’t know I was good at writing cute and funny stories. Guess the SHINee boys have infected me with the hyper/cute/stupid virus xP Glad you like it though! <3 (And yeah… Onew is afraid of losing his Jonghyun!)
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Secret FanGirl → Tihi, you really liked it? Good, now I’m happy and can’t stop grinning! =D Onew needs to chill? Well… He won’t be chilling in the next chapter xP (God, I’m already starting spoiling the story.. Need to stop talking now =P) Thanks for reading! ♥
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yama-yama-yamapi → Hey again~! =D Haha, I actually like the JongKey couple the most, so missed writing about them xP I’m still a bit sad for Onew since I’m obviously going to hurt him in this story though =( Anyway, glad to have you back ♥
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Undankbar → Yeah, I realized that too, but somehow I actually don’t feel weird writing Onew like that.. Guess Onew had his happy and nice moments in the other Fic xP But I feel bad for him though. If Key success… I guess Onew will have to look for another partner ^^ xP
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Catty → Hey~~! Haha, Onew is an ass? Haha, poor guy! 2MIN…? Hmm… I’ll give you the answer if it’s going to be that or not in the next chapter, if you understand the hint in the next chapter ^^ =D Hehe, yeah, Key would make a fine Juliette, and in the JongKey couple I guess he would be Juliette too xP
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Ida~ → Haha, yeah, Jonghyun is actually pretty nice. There’s a reason why he is Key’s dreamprince ^^ Glad I’m making you happy then! *Returning the hyper hug* ♥
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cookiesxcream → Waah! Glad you liked it!! =D And yep, JongKey is <3 ^^ Haha, yeah, poor Tae and Seung-ri ^^ And Onew is just jealous! I would have been that too if someone tried to take my boyfriend xP I actually pity him though =( Haha…! xP
Thanks for reading! ♥
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Nana → Haha! And I thought you guys would be angry if I said I got Ajoo in the other fic xP Anyway.. We didn’t marry though.. He found someone that wasn’t busy writing SHINee FanFics to her lovely readers! xP lol.. Thanks for reading though! ♥

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