| Fan Fiction |
by ~Genuie Cari~
Reviewed by super_
Title 4/5
The title goes really will with the story, but it’s kinda to into it. LOL. :] No mean offense or anything, but yeah it just to titled. (I have no idea what I’m saying. :[)
Poster/Background 10/10
The poster was very attractive, I love the blending in it and also the assortment that was all put together. Also the background went really perfectly with the poster too.
Forewords 8/10
The forward was very intellect and interesting, I really enjoyed it. :]
Plot 11/15
The plot was for both of the stories we interesting but to my point, I’ve read it somewhere, as in other character that were someone else, but to the point it was still lovely and enjoyable.
Flow 10/10
The flow was amazing, everything went really well, but I can see that you took your time into writing two parts for the readers. :]
Writing Style 5/5
Your writing style is talent, the way you put every common words together and the way you interact with your moment of writing.
Character Development 9/10
Your character development was amazing, how they main character’s in both stories had a baby at the end and the guy lefted them, but then again connected at the end was very enjoying and fun to read.
Creativity/Originality 7/10
The creativity was kinda the same in both stories. It would have been better if you kinda did or added different parts into both of the stories to make it: better. :]
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabularies 9/10
Your grammar and spelling are good, there are minor mistake but not that bad to the exact point that you’ll get all hype up about it. He-he.
Overall Enjoyment 7/10
I kinda of and kind of not, because both stories we likely the same and just had different character. LOL. I tried to read one story only, but it turned out to be both of them. He-he.
Bonus Point 4/5
I was really amazed by how pretty your poster is and also you took your time into posting both of the stories. Good-job. *thumbs-up*
Total: 84/100