| Fan Fiction |
by ~Genuie Cari~
Title: 5/5
I can’t explain this feeling upon reading the title. It’s like an arrow hit me and make me say.. “Wow! You have a nice title! Love it!”
Overall Appearance: 8/10
I do love your poster and background but it’s a lot better if you also change your text color. For example, if you have “Romantic” yet “Tragic” genre type of story, try using darker colors like plum but make sure it’s still readable and eye catching.
Forewords: 7.5/10
You didn’t give much detail about the characters but I love your quote. It’s very mysterious yet catchy, and it really got me curious to know the “MISTAKE” that made them separated to each other.
Plot: 13/15
I’m reading the Annabelle and I find each scene is very well organized. You are good in putting the right scene in proper order so I didn’t get bored or got lost in your story.
Creativity/Originality: 13.5/15
You have a nice imagination to create this kind of story. Although there are some familiar parts to me, I think you wrote this fanfic with your own style and flavor.
Flow: 10/10
The flow of your story is okay with me. I didn’t get lost and I find this story not too slow or too fast.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocab.: 12/15
You have a wide vocabulary and I envy you for that. But I just notice some mistakes on your grammar like…
“The numbers and letters on this tag should match with the ones on your tag if the baby is truly your.”
**the last word should be “yours” and not “your”
Writing Style: 10/10
Your writing style is fine since it’s not in script writing like other fanfic authors do. You also know how to make your readers get excited in your every update. I also love how you put words together so I was able to understand it very well. Thumbs up for that!
Overall Enjoyment: 8/10
I quite enjoyed it because you wrote this story with so much feeling.
Total: 87/100