Fan Fiction

Discovering Love COMPLETED

by christina

Chapter 6

Discovering Love

RAY’S HOUSE

Michelle: Hello? Is anyone home? Hm.. Where could they have gone?
Ron: Michelle? Is that you?
Michelle: Omg! Ron, what happen to you? Where is Ray?
Ron: I think the cops got him
Michelle: What? What do you mean the cops got him?
Ron: He.. He

Then Ron fainted

Michelle: Ron! Wake up! Ron! I better take him to the hospital

HOSPITAL

Michelle: Excuse me, Nurse can you please examine my friend? He’s badly injured
Nurse: Of course. Bring him here
Doctor: What’s wrong with him?
Michelle; He has many cuts and he just fainted
Ron: Where am I?
Doctor: You’re at the hospital. Do you know what your name is?
Ron: Ron Ng
Nurse: Miss, you have to go outside while we examine your friend
Michelle: Ok

Then Michelle cell rang

Michelle: Hello?
Ray: Hey, Michelle. Is Ron home yet?
Michelle: He is at the hospital
Ray: What? The hospital?
Michelle: He just fainted
Ray: I’ll be right there. Bye
Michelle: Bye

QIAN’S HOUSE

Qian: What’s wrong?
Ray: Ron is at the hospital. I have to go
Qian: Be careful ok?
Ray: I will

Then Ray left

HOSPITAL

Ray: Michelle, where is Ron?
Michelle: The doctor is examining him
Nurse: Who are Ron Ng’s relatives?
Ray: We are. How is he?
Nurse: He’s fine. Just a little weak
Michelle: Can we go see him?
Nurse: Of course
Ray: Ron, how are you?
Ron: Still alive.
Michelle: Ray, why was Ron all beat up? Did you guys have a battle?

Ray nodded his head

Michelle: Who is it against this time?
Ron: Samuel Chan
Michelle: Sam? Isn't he in jail?
Ray: He got out
Ron: Ray, how did you lose Ken?
Ray: All thanks to Qian
Michelle: Who is Qian?
Ron: Your cousin new target
Michelle: Is she pretty?
Ron: Yea. I wouldn't mind...
Ray: Dont even think about it. Qian is my girlfriend
Ron: Don't worry. I’d never take my best friend girl
Michelle: Ray, I w ant to meet her
Ray: Ok

QIAN’S HOUSE

Tavia: Qian, we’re home
Qian: You guys look so tired
Nancy: Arhg! I hate Raymond Lam and Ron Ng
Qian: What happen?
Tavia: We almost got to arrest them
Qian: What do you mean almost?
Nancy: Ken told us that Ray just disappear
Qian: Dont be so mad. You guys will get him next time
Tavia: I hope so
Qian: Why dont you guy go take a shower and then go to sleep
Nancy: Good idea. I’m going to take a shower first
Tavia: Oh.. No, you dont!

Then Qian cell phone rang

Qian: Hello?
Ray: Hey, it’s me
Qian: Ray! So how is Ron?
Ray: He’s fine. Do you want some dessert?
Qian: Maybe. Where are you?
Ray: Look outside your window

Qian walked to her window

Qian: Omg! What are you doing outside?
Ray: Dessert or not?
Qian: (smiling) I’ll be right there

Five minutes later Qian was downstairs

Ray: That was fast
Qian: So where are we going?
Ray: Get in the car
Qian: What are you up to?
Ray: You’ll see

20 minutes later

Ray: We’re here
Qian: Ray, where are we?
Ray: My house
Qian: Your house? I thought we were going to get dessert? Why are we at your house?
Ray: I’m going to make the dessert
Qian: (laughing) You know how to cook?
Ray: Of course

RAY’S HOUSE

Qian: Your house is so beautiful
Ray: Thanks. The kitchen is over here
Qian: Your kitchen is 5 times bigger then my room
Ray: So what kind of dessert do you want?
Qian: Hmm...? Do you know how to make cake?
Ray: Yea
Qian: I want a chocolate cake
Ray: That’s it?
Qian: Yup

While Ray was making the chocolate cake, Qian kept on staring at him.

QIAN’S P.O.V

Ray sure knows how to make a girl happy. How could I arrest such a nice and sweet guy? :sign:

END OF P.O.V

Ray: Qian? Hello? Are you there?
Qian: Huh?
Ray: I’m done
Qian: That quick?
Ray: Yup, All I have to do is out this in the oven for 30 minutes and then we can get
Qian: Oh.. ok

Ray opened the oven and put the tray in. He then set the timer for 30 minutes

Ray: Lets go to the living room
Qian: Ray, where do your parents live?
Ray: They’re dead
Qian: I’m so sorry
Ray: I think I was 15 when my parents died. After my parents died my uncle took me in
Qian: So your uncle lives with you?
Ray: No, he is dead too. He died a couple of years ago
Qian: How did he die?
Ray: A cop shot him
Qian: Cop? What was the cop name?
Ray: Ma Sir
Qian: Ma Sir? Kenneth Ma?
Ray: Kenneth Ma’s dad
Qian: Oh.. You mean the older Ma Sir. Why did he kill your uncle?
Ray: I dont want to take about it
Qian: I understand
Ray: What about you?
Qian: My parents’ dead when I was little. My best friend took me in after my parents died
Ray: I missed my parents. I wish they were still here
Qian: Dont be so sad Ray. You still have Ron and.. Me

Ray turns around and stare at Qian

QIAN’S P.O.V

Omg! What did I just say? Oh.. no! Ray is staring at me! What do I do? How come the timer hasn't ringed yet?

END OF P.O.V

Ray: Qian..
Qian: Uh.. I think the timer rang

Ray got closer to Qian

Ray: I didnt hear it ring
Qian: Are you sure? Because I think I heard it
Ray: No, I’m positive

Then the timer rang

Qian: Well, it rang right now. Lets see how it looks

Ray open the oven and took out the tray

Ray: Try it

Qian took a piece of the cake. She ate it and then gave a disgusting look

Ray: Is it that bad?

Qian gave Ray her plate and told him to try it

Ray: No, it tastes good.
Qian: Are you sure?
Ray: Yea
Qian: Have another taste.
Qian got her plate and then smashed it to Ray’s face

Qian: HAHAHAHA! You look like chocolate
Ray: Oh.. You are so dead
Qian: Uh.. oh..

Qian started to run and Ray chased after her. Soon Ray caught up to Qian. And he started to tickle her.

Qian: Stop! Ok! I’m sorry
Ray: I thought so
Qian: So mean
Ray: Me mean? You smash the cake in my face
Qian: So..
Ray: So.. You’re the one that is mean. Not mean.
Qian: I like being mean to you
Ray: You little...
Qian: Little what huh?
Ray: Rabbit! You are a little Rabbit!
Qian: I’m not a rabbit! Dont call me that!
Ray: Rabbit! Rabbit!

Then Qian headed for the door

Ray: Qian, where are you going?
Qian: home!
Ray: I was just kidding! Dont be mad!

QIAN’S P.O.V

He is so cute! He thinks I’m mad at him! How cute!

END OF P.O.V

Ray: At least let me drive you, then?
Qian: So you d o want me to leave?
Ray: No, I didnt mean it like that

Then Qian started to laugh

Ray: Ah.. So you were playing with me the whole time
Qian: You really thought I was mad at you? How can I be mad at you? You are too cute
Ray: That’s true. I’m cute
Qian: Please, dont make me throw up
Ray: So do you still want to go home?
Qian: Yea, it’s getting late
Ray: Ok, let me get my jacket and I’ll take you home
Qian: Ok

20 minutes later

Ray: Good night
Qian: Thanks for the dessert

Then Qain did something she never thought she would do. She leans in and gave Ray a goodnight kiss on the lip

Qian: Goodnight
Ray: (blushing) By.. Bye